Love this story! My fave!

"and I was just starting to like this one" 'pika is going to have a suitcase of clothes he wants to burn after this.

If Kuroro was lying about sending his spiders away (very possible given Hisoka said he saw 2 on the boat) I can see him calling them in to meet wherever team Oito is regrouping. "Chain user Kurapika has put a new blade in my heart binding me to do everything I can to protect them." "Your it! We're ending the succession war now. I want to say 'go wild' but he wouldn't want that and I don't know if I have any other restrictions that might set off." "The mission is bring me 4th prince alive so Fei can spend a long time on him, kill the other princes, don't kill anyone you don't have to. Begin!"

I like how Kuroro is dude I can take advantage of you while your drunk on stress in the last bit even though he's been doing everything he could up till then. I also like how you can practically see the thoughts of what he's planning to do to 4th prince if he actually did have 'pika.

I love babysitter 'pika! I find it highly amusing how everyone assumes 'pika is sleeping with someone even when they know how busy his schedule is and how mono focused he is on his tasks.

"I don't like him harming you like this" 'pika's response should be "Thats rich given how much harm you've done to me. If you left visible marks I'd be a solid bruse."

I hate when a chapter just doesn’t come out and you’re just trying to write pieces of it but it doesn’t seem to work. It can be so incredibly frustrating, and i’m never satisfied with the result when it happens with something i’m writing, just done with it. I do think that this chapter did turn out well after all your effort.
I love Hisoka going around to everyone, manipulating events for his own amusement. He’s a creep, but kind of a chaotic neutral creep.

Ahhhh my broken heart is fixed now. I don't even care anymore if Kurapika and Chrollo don't end up together in this fic, I would just love it if they both stay alive and all.
Also thank you for rekindling my love for Hisoka. The clown has finally redeemed himself and I think there is hope for his soul still.
Lol who am I kidding?
This chapter didn't seem boring to me! On the contrary, it's such a welcome break from Chrollo's depression. Now all there is left to see is Tserriednich getting the punch he deserves! I hope things have gotten better for you!
P.S. Next chapter shall be more exciting.
Me- Checks phone every 10 seconds.
Take care and good luck to you!

Oh man been meaning to review for a few days but I've been so tied up with trying to update my own fic that I neglected on getting this done last Friday. But I am here with a review. .

I have to say I am a bit surprised with the premise of this chapter. So that was Hisokas role eh? But such a double agenda. Why did I not see that coming? Hisoka is the type to not do things without strings attached and or course so long as he benefits in the process. Just hope Kura and Chrollo realize they are both being played.

Also poor Kura. Despite being spared is still on that path towards a needless death. When will this boy learn he has so much to live for and much to forgive? He knows that deep down he has for Chrollo and that they need each other. Oh Kura cannot you see Chrollo cares so much for you?

Really good chapter! Keep it up! You surely hit me in the feels every time. ;o;

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You almost destroyed the one thing in the world keeping Kuroro from throwing his heart out the window and losing his mind. Hisoka saved the boat! Hahaha.
It's really entertaining to see Kuroro shifting out of Danchou character despite himself. And yes! Kurapika's introspective thoughts are really good. The fact that they are not architecturally organized is revealing of his state of mind, don't you think? So these passages which you might think are imperfect really do the job.
Finding this update was a real highlight in my day (first thing in the morning because Chibi Kuroro doesn't sleep in the ante meridian (AM) hours. No: there might finally be more information about Kurapika released in your awesome fanfiction!)
This is not boring at all. Am I right, people? Well this is just the kind of stuff I'm hoping to read! Thanks so much for the update and please keep everything going steadily just like you were able to do all this time like a boss.

Like it love it continue it please this is great can't wait for the next chapter sorry for the short review but I gotta go so bye for now and yes I'm still reading just got caught up in stuff so no reviews the last few chapters.

*Hugs tightly* How are you doing unreadable-san? All I can say is your grandfather did a brilliant job in molding a beautiful author, take your time to deal with real life, fanfiction can wait. Stay safe!
So this chapter was sad and beautiful at the same time. You needn't have apologised for errors, there are none! Despite the sad times you are going through, I am happy you didn't actually kill Pika. Chrollo should suffer a little tbh. Ha, I knew Hisoka would be my saviour! I hope Tserriednich gets his a$$ kicked soon enough. Great work again!
Lots of love,
Sweet(s) Dreamer

I’m so sorry to hear about your grandfather and your difficult workload. Having someone you care about die is such a hard thing to go through, and i want you to know that i don’t blame you at all for the hiatus. Take all the time you need.
I personally find writing to be very cathartic, and i feel as though you’ve channeled some of your own feelings into this chapter. I hope it helped you. It certainly felt very real.
There’s also that part of me that loves that the Phantom Troupe is coming into things.

Finally managed to get my review in despite I read this Monday afternoon - gratefully I caught your tumblr post though that you updated. Had been looking forward to an update for some time now.

First and foremost - I am really sorry to hear about what has transpired in your life and my heart goes out to you for the loss in your family. I truly know how stressing and mentally taxing that can be, especially during the grieving process. I've been there several times and it is never easy, but I will say this, it will get easier over time. Just hang in there and I really hope things get better for you. 3

In regards to the story, short or no, this was a very enlivening update and was definitely worth the wait. I really feel bad for Chrollo, though. Even though you - and thankfully, allowed Kurapika to survive (really thought you had committed to some major character death here), sadly, Chrollo isn't aware of this and has to grieve through his loss. Same for Leorio. The emotions, how heartfelt it was; you really delivered the anguish and angst very well and I think perhaps, you projected a little of yourself through the chapter. Which is a good thing as it can help with release. I have done this myself several times with past stories I've written. It really brought out the feelings for the characters and made it a worthwhile read.

Still curious as to the exact reason of Hisoka's involvement in Kurapika's survival and I really pray to God he isn't planning on going back to that creep of a prince. Bastard is screwed up enough as is and already did a lot of damage to poor Kura. Now that he's survived, the least he needs is more trauma. :(

Again kudos to you! As always, you have a beautiful writing style and I love how you intermingle your PoV switches. Keep up the good work! :D

The pring has the eyes
Oh goodness he’s coming back to the prince
Omg!