Can I just say that I fucking hate Neptune? Seriously. NO ONE GETS IN THE WAY OF MY SHIP!

Nox nox nox nox nox! Come back Sentinel! This story is awesome and has such a good new Semblence system for Remnant, it is such a interesting idea snd likely had more thought but into it then canon did lol. The White Rose is very cute and well written, the Bumblebee and Permafrost exist (not bad just not as big of a fan). The actual details of the before/during/aftermath of the Battle of Vale/Beacon is honestly better then Canon, the characters react to the incidents more realistically. Blue Rose can be OP on occasion but he doesn't seem to be invincible which is good. This fic is definetly worth your attention and sits as one of my favorite unfortunately unfinished finds.

Will you be updating this story anymore? I only ask because so really liked this one and it’s kinda on a cliffhanger, sorry if there’s something going on if and when you read this.

I hope you're doing well and return to finish this eventually. It's by far my favourite RWBY AU out there. I hope life is treating you kindly.

This is still one of my favorite unfinished stories. I have reread it multiple times now, and I will do so again today!

where is the update?! T.T I miss this story!

I love this story, and I do hope you come back to it one day. It's a wonderful tale.

And don't let the critics get you down. This is your story, we're just the lucky ones who get to read it. So let your inspiration guide you.

*is still snickering over the Loki scene*
Loki: 1, Jaques: 0
That was brilliant, it really was XD

Hmm... I get an "elitist pig who refuses to believe anyone could be smarter than he is" vibe off of this Ironwood... Aka a glory hound whse incompetence is directly linked to his self-aggrandizing behavior and narrow-minded beliefs. At least so far.

Please don’t drop this story

Just ran through the whle story, really good! Hope you'll continue it soon!

This is my third time reading this story and I really like it would you please update when you can I would appreciate it so much

I would love to take this fanfic's lore and turn it into a new world. I'm already working on it on wattpad. please allow me to. pls respond

"Let me know what you think of this."
Oh boy, what I think of this is that I am glad I found this because the start is super promising and I hope the rest of the story lives up to my now pretty high expectations! Very good start!

This was probably made before Henceforward, and the results are already in, but if you were looking for an idea. Dust manipulation.