"Ferret-faced man"? Snorted milk when I read that

Snart’s reincarnation. A new topic and interestingly written.

I loved this! First well thought out plan to get Snart back I've found here. I'm a writer too and I know you can't make it easy. It had to be hard to be worth it.

It may not be the greatest story ever written, but it's definitely going into my "best fanfiction" category. Seriously, you've broken into my top-ten for the Arrowverse, and that's not nothing.

Mick POV... 'The *good* drugs', Mick and Snart talking Amaya being such a good friend to Mick, and Leonard snarking at Gideon... these are a few of my faaavorite things!

I LOVE IT! The flashbacks, alternating between telling him to fight and telling him to give up? Such a wonderful idea, and executed so well! And the present-day scenes were wonderful. Mick isn't even my favorite Legend, but you write him so well that I was tearing up. WELL DONE!

*insane keysmashing*
Uhm, well... I fangirled over the galley stuff. All the galley stuff, because I love fluff. I Lu-lu-love it!
"Hey, we're doing fine."
"You broke time."
Pitch-perfect interactions! My heart was full and happy and all was right with the world... And then, then you had to go all Whedon/George RR Martin on me. I respect that. Really, I do. Now, if you'll excuse me, I just have to get a dust pan to clean up the fragments of my heart which are currently all over the floor.

You figured it out very well. This was the chapter I was most looking forward to because I love these two characters, but I can't say that it's my favorite chapter, since I've gotten very fond of your scenes with Cisco interacting with the Legends. I honestly don't have a favorite, but the ones with Cisco doing *anything* or Mick eating tend to make me grin. This chapter was a change of pace, since the other chapters have all had so much going on, just in terms of explaining practicalities or plans and having a whole bunch of people in the scenes, whereas this was just two people talking, but at the same time, these two are kind of the heart of the story, so it's difficult in a different kind of way, but you manage to write it all so very, very well!

Snart POV... It's only my favorite thing!

Leaving this note after reading your opening author's note but before moving on to the actual chapter: Eeep. Color me concerned.
I've read it. This was horrifying in it's attention to detail. I LOVED IT... and I'm scared for the guys. Also, Rip is completely right. Sara always has knives. :)

Mick's survivor's guilt and self-worth issues are hurting my heart, but it's such a good hurt that I can't put this story down! Everyone is so well done, especially Cisco. I can *HEAR* his dialogue. It's perfect!

You... the... the Speed Force appearing to Mick as Little!Leonard! My heart! And Mick continues to be smarter than anyone give him credit for!

... so, you're doing the 'Gallifrey Falls No More' approach. *nods* I like it! I hereby christen this plan "cup o' Snart". As for the interactions between everybody... BELLISSIMO! The Legends team meeting and Team Flash interacting with Kick were all GOLD!

Ohhh, Mick POV. It's so rare, and you do it well. Mick often doesn't get the credit he deserves, being disregarded as the dumb muscle, so I'm really glad that you've taken the time and effort to show the complexities and nuances of his thought processes. I'm planning to binge this story, but I'll try to leave reviews for every chapter. Thanks again for writing this. It's an interesting idea and you've gotten it off to a strong start. Points for not showing all your cards, up front, either!

Okay. Not gonna lie. This was amazing. A friend suggested this to me, andeven though it took me awhile to finish itI'm so glad I read through it. The entire thing brought up so many feelings from heart wrenching to heart warming and I loved every minute of it!