OK! Can't wait to catch it!
Love twilight sparkle and now I gotta take to the skies

Don't worry so much about disliking what you've written. Take your time and make sure that the story you choose to share is what you want to share. And again don't worry about your readers, they will of course be waiting when you are ready to share.

PS. I now have you as a friend author so I'll know when the new story is up.

Its OK! I can understand Alia! Take your time, there's no pressure! It'll be great!
Love twilight sparkle and now I gotta take to the skies

The rain storm finally gone, thank goodness that weather is EVIL! Any cold, wet, dark weather so not an enjoyable time. I agree with Natalia, Milo for a born Auradonian is extremely sour in behavior. As for the dishes not being done I saw lazy a little too. ;-)

I actually really like your writing style, it's so different and unique because it's so descriptive which really sets the scene. The characters actually seem to have a personality, which is good because reading a story with no personality in the characters is quite boring and I'm impressed because it's only the second chapter. Can't wait to keep reading! :)

Sorry, forgot to add this to my first review, Thanks for the belated birthday wish, you make me feel special by saying that, ;) and, woah, pinksakura271 doesn't like the cold? I like it when its cold, its good, but , unfortunately, not much cold weather over here :( well, if she wants, she can visit here, in KwaZulu Natal, my province , the warmest province ever, she'll like it, and one more thing, Milo is a character from the Disney movie Atlantis, sorry, just wanted you to know, great story.
Love twilight sparkle

Thanks! And also, its OK, you don't feel comfortable revealing your name, its fine :) I understand, and also, wow England! I wish it would rain here as often as England, over here, in winter, we die in the heat ;( in winter! The coldest of all seasons! And now, heat waves are here! I'm boiling as I type this, and amazing piece! Short and sweet like you.
Love twilight sparkle

Now I'm wondering: what's up with Milo? Yes, I know, Auradonians usually tend to not trust VKs or believe they can be good, but dang, Milo. Whatever happened to you that you seem to take this mindset to the extreme? Anyway, I liked this chapter and again, great job. And about the wait: it's okay, you take as much time as you need with this. Don't rush it.

Sorry to hear that things are so stressful right now. Don't worry about when you will be able to update. This story will remain an alert on my account and I'm sure the same holds true for at least some of your other readers. When the story does return everyone will be waiting.

Oops! Sorry for not reviewing on the 3rd of September, I was busy with my other online friends, sorry, and it was also my birthday, soooooooooo sooooorrrrrryyyyyyyy!
Love twilight sparkle

Don't worry about it too much! But some advice from someone who was in a very similar situation to you- don't leave it for too long. Try and write a little bit as much as you can, even just a sentence or two on your phone. The longer you leave it, the harder it is to go back and the less inspiration you have. It's hard to balance everything though, I know! I would be in the same year as you if I lived in England, and having friends that do live there, I understand the stress of it all. Best of luck with everything, I wish you all the success in your exams!

Awwwwww thanks! No one really compliment my names since its not so famous here in south Africa. The only popular names are, Isa or Jessie, so thanks , it means a lot coming from you, I'm honoured, really honoured! :) and also, I loved this chapter! And take your time, OK? Bye lovie
Love twilight sparkle

Its OK! I'm in my crucial years too, we finish school over here when we are eighteen or seventeen, I live in south Africa, and we study a specific course and then we do jobs, so its OK! No biggie (just so you know, I'm fifteen)
Love twilight sparkle

Hey relax, Golden you I will stick around. Just focus on your work. Post when you can, it's not a purrblem. ;-)

It was a great chapter as we got to meet the VKs, I can't wait to see Pandora and Hayden meet for the first time and how the VKs meet the other AKs and how they'll interact with each other.