| Reviews for Parabatai Pain |
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   Maia's Pen chapter 8 . 6/15 ALLL THHHHHEEE FEEELLLSSS! WOWWW! This was a heart-wrencher! GAH! I have so enjoyed reading this compilation over the past day. I LOVE how you write Jace's and Alec's bond. It's beautiful. Thank you for sharing your talents and imagination. I'm so happy that I discovered you, you have inspired my Muse, and I'll certainly check out other fics from you. Best wishes! Your new fan, Maia's Pen ) |
| Maia's Pen chapter 7 . 6/15 WOOOW! Standing ovation to you, writer! That was OUTSTANDING! Magnus kicking some A! WHAT A STORY! ALL THE FEELS were served to my imagination. THANK YOU! You have a trey gift. Reading this was like reading a legit professionally published BOOK! THANK YOU for the adventure |
| Maia's Pen chapter 6 . 6/15 OOOMMMGGG! This chapter was sooooo action-packed! Max was kicked ass, Alec kicked ass . . . ahhhh! SUSPENSE! I LOVE THISSSSS! |
| Maia's Pen chapter 3 . 6/15 Ohhhh my gawd! THIS IS SOOOO GOOD! It's past 3AM hahaha . . . I need to sleep but your story is soooo gooodddddd it's thieving me of sleep. You are such a talented writer! Your stories are so absurdly refreshing to read! You have skilllllsss! This plot is so exciting and mysterious and . . . POOR ALEC! They branded him?! AHHHH! I should really attempt sleep . . . we shall see . . . the suspense is real. ;) |
| Maia's Pen chapter 2 . 6/14 THIS! This was everything! AHHH! Adorable overload. The imagery and action were soooo wellllll written! I could SEE Jace and Alec pounding the crapola outta each other as that demon springboarded from one to the next. The 'insufferable ' and 'adorable' lines were tooooo cuuutttee!I love the bromance so hard! Love how beautifully you expressed (Alec too) how they don't need words to communicate. LOVLEY writing! Thank youuuu for these! |
| Maia's Pen chapter 1 . 6/14 Ohhhh I loved this! You can WRITE! YAAAY! I have been searching for a Jace x Alec story that had actual punctuation and a well-thoughtout storyline . . . I hit the jackpot! It's such a treat to read your words. Your writing is so concise and your story was wonderfully written and full of suspense. I love the Jace x Alec bond sooo much! This was ADORABLE! You deserve a donut too! You have a true talent for writing flowing, catchy dialogue. Each character was so in character! Great ending line . . . "I would've run twice as fast". ;) I will read onward . . . Maia |
| top story chapter 6 . 5/12/2019 Duh duh |
| Lfxx chapter 8 . 12/8/2018 This is incredible writing! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2018 This is amazing! One of my favorite fanfics. So well-written and with a great storyline. You should write more Jalec Shadowhunters fanfintions. |
| malecforeverandafter chapter 1 . 10/31/2018 Love it. Good job with this! 3 |
| Lfxx chapter 2 . 8/9/2018 I love this so much! |
| Whumplove chapter 7 . 3/23/2018 Hitlers Warlock was an amazingly story! You did a great job portraying the characters. I was hooked from the beginning. Thank you for sharing your talent with us! |
| Whumplove chapter 1 . 3/23/2018 This was amazing! |
| Greyisreading chapter 8 . 10/22/2017 My, my heart. It's crying in misery. Oh this was perfect! You definitely know how to get those Jalec feels going. It was so well written and it actually bought tears to my eyes, which doesn't happen a lot. Fantastic job as always. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/21/2017 Those gentle insults - so cute - DOUBLE POSSESSION GENIUS DUDE Jace punched his own mouth LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL |
