plz get off your ass, and get us some more of this very good story

A good story you have created. I hope that you make more chapter for it

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All this fluff has set up a fantastic emotional slam dunk. I want to see Mason die in a gruesome way.
So. Bad.

Cheers mate! Love the story!

Very good start.

Amazing, I hope to see another chapter of this story one day! I've been rereading some of the old chapters to pass the time, especially the one where Mason signs End Of The Night, LOl! I couldn't get enough of it!
And it's fascinating how you managed to keep the story canon to the anime but also added your own touches to it.

VERY CREATIVE! I found this story about a couple of months ago and Im actually in the process of reading it a second time! As a huge destiny fan, it always warms my heart when i see a fanfic about it. And it's very interesting how a little love and acceptance can do to shape a young soul, but not always change its course, lol.

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Hope to see you continue this, was a really fun read _

Story is good. Is mason going to give ruby the spear early because she’s going to beacon early?

Also, penis

huh.

Other then Yami, great story. Will Cinder be going to Beacon, and if so will some one be replacing her as Salem's puppet?

I could make an OC's heavilly influensed by other francises for you.

I’m liking this A LOT! Do you have ideas on having some guardians meeting Mason unintentionally or intentionally

this is a awesome fic i hope you get inspired to make more