It was cute

You're getting present and past tense mixed together. Reborn is also a little OOC, but that is expected. Although, overall, it's a good concept.

cool.

this would be a great fic to continue! pls write more chapters :')

Funny and cute

Maybe work on the words you use and when you use then the spelling was great it’s just a few don’ts when you could have put something that would make most sense.

you know? i really want to see what happen if the other see skull crosdressing and singing to...
by the way, it's really goo! please keep writing!