I am glad that I have found such an excellent story. You decided to use the timeline of the anime but you made the story more realistic, taking into account the fact that Ash and his friend have suffered damages. Will you make Ash and Misty grow up and become teens? Will you add any shipping to the story? Greetings from Argentina.

Wow, its an awesome story reminder of anime in a different way but fascinating to read, its a great read i am loving he has a different set of pokemon from pokemon but still it looks same, he wont get the kanto starters i guess it would have been lovely to see him get the starters of this region, i havent seen mankey in action a lot would love to see him though, the only problem in this is too many Characters from anime you are juggling its that what put it off ash and party are ok sometimes gary as an interlude but too much of team rocket stuff s going on, apart from that the story is awesome

I love this fic so much, glad you’ve updated. (~ ‾‾) ~

Wait, how does this only have 67 reviews

And to make it double.

Ah, poor Ash. Always doing something stupid and getting shocked for it.

Wonderful a reminder of how realistic and true to the anime it is in new ways. I love when we cut to Ash's group with team rocket a second.

This is hands down the best Pokemon story I've ever read and I have read the Traveler. I love your Ash who's naive, immature, one of the wisest kids ever. I can literally see the potential in him, the only Ash that I know that is even remotely is on AO3 a fanfiction Professor's student I think. This is the 1st story I've ever reviewed on that's how much I love it.

so why exactly did oak wait fifty years to give one kid a pikachu? also oak is a confirmed pedophile

Oh dear. It looks like things are going to get worse before they're going to get better.

Again, good job with the horror and the tension.

Omg the suspense! Who shouldn't we trust?!

Wa sit Ash’s aura that protected him from injury?

Suspenseful on all fronts. Very nicely done.

Ahhhhhh I love this! The ending is just fantastic.

Wobb used mirror coat...?