Should've said this at the end of the first book, but I'm saying it now. You're brilliant, absolutely, totally, completely brilliant. You've made my birthday. Thank you, brilliant lady.

Well, that was emotionally draining. You want the logical review first or the emotional one?

Emotionally: That HURT you bastard. I was ready for Remus to die. I had prepared myself and everything. HER death made my stomach drop. Marcus' was so sad and Pavarti's was gut wrenching, but HER's, whom i wont spoil for people who read reviews, HURT.

So, once again, great story. The writing feels even more well filled out than last time. Very thought and emotionally evoking. There are twists and turns and it's not just a rehash of the books, which is great. Since we know what Peter did when he escaped in the end of PoA, I was not surprised to see him not appear. So props on you for keeping and engaging story. Also I see what you did with the naming of this book. The Blood-Traitors daughter referred to several characters: Astoria, Ginny, Luna, Daphne, even Hermione if we remember the leading adult women view her as a daughter. They each had their own plots: Ginny coming to terms with the previous year, Astoria and Harry's potential pairing, Astoria looking Like Ginny, Luna and Hermione's coming to terms and coming out to their friends, Daphne learning to accept and her potential betrothal with Marcus taking off.

Well done. And now, onto the next.

Goddamnit mate, this, this chapter firmly cements you as my favourite author on this site.
I'm someone that has ASPD, basically, the same thing that sociopaths and psychopaths are classified as. As you can guess, my emotional responses are not quite the same as others, and being called cold or callous would be more classification than an insult.
Anyhow, I digress. The point I was making, is that despite that, you have managed to make tears form in my eyes with this chapter, especially on the part about Astoria's funeral. As far as I am concerned, you are bloody talented. The last time this happened when I was reading a piece of writing, be it fanfiction, webnovel or published book, was over 3 years ago.
Sure, part of this is my own personality working with the concrete scenario than that presented by others, but nonetheless, I felt the need to say how damn impressed I am.

On another note, you better not have just fucking sent Luna and her Father to Albania where Voldy was supposed to be roaming in canon, cause I am not dealing with a dead or heartbroken luna for your next book.

The tears are fucking back, damn you!

If songs were to be the same as poetry, then yeah, neither you nor Harry can write songs for shit.
Thankfully, songs need much more in them, so even simple, uneven lyrics can be great songs when the right way to sing them is applied, including the way you sing the words and the music that accomanies them.

So no worries, in my mind Harry made them word.

I really hope we find out what the memory was because I can't figure it out.
One part of me thought it was vision of her, but that would likely put her even more against him and should not be his best memory.
So, is it simply all his memories of her?

I want to know damnit!

"Teenagers, even those that are mature, are prone to poor decisions and over reaction"
Bullshit. The reason most teenagers act the way they do is based on the life they lived, not because some magic made someone less capable of decision-making cause they were 13.

Do not get me wrong, I am not disagreeing with the way you have portrayed their actions. Hermione might be a bit much perhaps, but the behaviour of Ginny is absolutely reasonable, hell, I'd say it's tame. Frankly speaking, I am an adult and I might have reacted much worse than her cause I do not take kindly to the idea that anyone, be it another person or fate itself, forcing me towards a decision, and she had to deal with that on top of everything else.

What I am complaining is you tossing up their behaviour to "oh they're just teenagers and that's why they act like this" That is a lazy response that you don't even need since you proceed to explain it much better afterwards.

I'm glad you made the adults take their heads out of their asses, but I'm still dissatisfied with them nonetheless. Harry should have been told the entire truth the moment he recovered after his confrontation with Quirell.

Any adult that believes withholding such important information is either malicious, stupid, or so set in their ways they cannot see past their personal opinions.

Another excellent story finished! I'm thinking maybe I should slow down but I just can't. So I'm back to REALLY, REALLY, REALLY hoping the last book is done. So maybe just a wee bit of pressure.

So, I thought you might appreciate some feedback in regards to your ending comments. Of course we are fed up with the way Ginny and Hermione are behaving. But that's part of the story. It's part of what is capturing us all and driving us to continue reading. The same as the original JKR stories. If people weren't confused and fed up with Ron's supposed friendship and then him being touted as the every oyal friend, then people didn't read the same books I did. You are doing a great job. Thanks for all the hard work!

I can imagine the cup with text

not scared of you know who all my friends are girls

yeah I get to hate bill now, fuck off.
name one story were characters keep secrets were it actual fucking works.

I haven’t really been reviewing anything I have read from you due to it being so old I will when I catch up to your writing tho. I just had to say I laughed for five minutes straight when you had Harry say “is she cute?” I just had to say you are a very talented writer with the perfect timing for what you wrote keep it up thanks for what you do

i really like the whole "sacred 28" idea

Hehehe

You give the reader an unrelenting diet of quidditch, but the Sltths are as bad as the Chudley Cannons .Go back to the canon rules.