Aww, this was a great ending.
I really enjoyed your story; it was sweet and fun to read.
The only criticism I can offer is that your writing is still quite littered with type-o's here and there (mainly redundant words or evidence that you changed your sentence mid-sentence), so perhaps giving it another cursory reading before posting would help.

Paige is such a frickin jerk!

Rawr Sirius scaring the big bad snake is fun!

Oh, their stories are so ugh! I admit, this was hard to read in a room full of chatty coworkers, but I plan to reread it later again. From what I got though, I loved it. :3

This was a really fun and engaging story! I'm looking forward to reading the second part. :3

"everlasting grin" - that's such a great way to describe James, lol.

Chicken hug!
Okay, I mean, I know he washed his hands, but his hands certainly still smell like marinade. :-P

This was a perfect meeting. :D

This was a fun first chapter. I had assumed that Paige was a sister, but you make a good point. His muggle alter ego would be the perfect jerk face to break his heart.

I loved it !
A great muggle AU I didn’t know I needed !
I liked that you give your character time to develop a nice friendship. Your style is great
Thanks for writing

Oh my god... I forgot that this was going to be the last chapter :o Aw :'3 ... I'm so proud of you for writing this but at the same time. Totally gonna miss it. Anyhow, on with actually reading the story and then writing the review while I do as per usual ;)

I really like how you discuss James and Lily. Because you make it clear that you don't think that the two should be in a relationship but at the same time you're giving them a good friendship. You are sticking with what you've done earlier in the fic which is that you make them both into good characters and you highlight their strengths while also pointing out that their strengths would clash. I'm probably rambling but I hope you get what I'm trying to say. I also really like that you indicate that Marlene and James could be in a relationship but you're not actually saying that they will be. I mean, the fact that Sirius hope that they will be doesn't really mean anything other than... he hopes they will xD (Damn Anna, way to state the obvious...) I also really like Sirius and Marlene being nerds while James is not :P

Okay, you did some serious James x Marlene indication right there xD

Oh my god, okay first ... Remus reaction to when they were "accused" of shagging xD I LOVE IT! And that Sirius flicked his finger on James forehead. I can totally imagine that happening. James being protective. YES. ALL THE YES! I love it. Seriously, I had not even imagined this until this day. I've read about it before but it's always been made in a really... stereotypical way. A guy protecting his friend or sister. But this version I really like!

SIRIUS. Well, let's just say that I blushed when Remus did.

This was amazing. I really love how you wrapped it up. This entire fic has been an absolute joy to read because it's brilliant and it's beautiful like all your other stories. It has the exact right amount of drama, cheekiness, humour, emotional rawness and friendship. I've said it before but I have to say it again that you did a marvellous job with translating every element from the magical world into this Muggle Universe. I would not mind if you wrote more stuff like this because it is absolutely magical. Haha... pun not intended this time. No, but in all seriousness. I really like how you managed to keep it on a good level and everything made sense in the way you presented it. It's an amazing story Penny! Well done :)

Loved this story!

AHHHHHHHHH I swear I read this at 10 on a saturday when I really just needed some cute romance going on and this was perfect! My crush right now is difficult so it was refreshing reading this! SO ADORABLE!

I love how you wrote Remus confusion in the beginning of the chapter and how you described Sirius masking his anger. The line about his eyes is just so descriptive and seriously just remarkable. I love it!

YES! The bike makes an entrance and I have never been happier in my life. Thank gods for the bike. I've always loved that part about his personality because it says something about him. I mean yeah, you could look at the bike and say that he likes vehicles but you can also kinda analyse why he went for a bike and then all of the sudden you can draw these parallells between his personality and ... damn I am analysing this very fucking deep considering its a vehicle.

I really like the way you had Sirius kind of offer to intervene and help Remus. Both in the way you had them talk about what had happened and about the way you had him offer. I've read similar scenes (and I have written similar scenes) and it's easy to go for a more dramatic reaction in Sirius ... for example have him just act and not ask if Remus actually wants him to help. So, I really like that you had him offer because it shows that while Sirius is a loyal and caring character he is also loyal to the point where that means doing what that person wants rather than doing what he thinks that he needs to do. There's just a lot of thoughts and implications with the way he approached it.

OH MY GOD. PAIGE CHEATED ON HIM WITH REGULUS! That was fucking brilliant and not something that I knew that I wanted. BUT HOLY FUCK I SHIP IT ALREADY. That is genius Penny. Really genius!

I really like the lack of words. By that I mean that for a moment or two there they're both kind of ... well just not as eloquent as they have been for the other parts of the chapter or the story as a whole. I like that they didn't finish their sentences. It was beautiful and a nice change of approach.

The ending was brilliant! It was beautiful and calm. I like that about this story as a whole. There has been dramatic events but not crazy, over the top dramatic. You've managed to keep it at a good level. I really like this chapter. It was amazing and you should be really proud of this story as a whole. You've done such a good job. I can't wait to read the final chapter :D

How could you end it there! I cant wait to see what's next.