OMG this is one of the best splatoon fanfiction I've read so far! Please, continue writing, it's pretty unique how every character is! And all the situations, hope you see this and well, hope you write chapter 9!

wait she is jealous? Oh this'll be fun to watch!

THis is a cute story! I enjoy Crayon and Chalk's interaction with each other very much as well as all the schemes they are getting into. I can't wait to see what you have in store next.

this is starting alright. i'll keep my eye on this.