...I feel like an idiot, but honestly the first thing that popped into my head in that last bit was 'holy crap, her dad got kidnapped by the Cheshire Cat'.

And that's what happens when one stays up till 2:00 am reading fanfiction.

Nicely done! Excited for more!

I looooved it. You did a really nice job with Izuku helping Rei.

thank you for the update! the chapters were sooo good! your take on BNHA is really unique and interesting! I'm very much in love with how you've wonderfully balanced out the original content with your own content!

I've actually been trying to get into writing myself cause I've been recently struggling with words, much more than I should be. I was wondering if you would be willing to give me some advice? totally no pressure though, it's only if you have the time and want to help out!

I remember the first going around of this story, the mystery of the father and what the wife was trying to uncover was so confusing. He deals with time and he did something bad like killing people, it can be assume he didn’t want to or he was controlled in doing so and in turn it eating at his sanity, but he somehow “missing” and the wife trying to find him.

I could never get anything after that, So this time around I’m determined to get a better understanding!

great chapter, I know Bakugou and Todoroki had to be weirded out by Rei crying, probably more so Bakugou. I always wondered what they thought. Anywhos can’t wait for the next chapter!

This was a great chapter! I like how you bounce back and forth with the flashbacks so smoothly, that’s something i’m working on doing myself so cool to see it done. i could never understand some of logic in the way Rei and Todoroki was raise, I mean come on parents really and it’s bad that this happens in real life too smh though i do hope we get a little glimpse of what Rei mother was like when her husband was around, like how much did she change.

Also for the character I want Rei to into act more is Mina! I love her, oh and Kirishima as well and Aoyama! hahaha

Thanks for the hard work love the story _

I love your character her personality is interesting and I love her interactions with the other characters cant wait to see what happens next and i love her relationship with Todoroki

I had really cool idea for Rei's updated costume instead of a flask what if she had something like those thin backpacks that hold a gallon of water in them and in stead of the tube that is used to drink from it this would have two tubes that attach to her wrists to release the water from there

OH MY GOD LOOK AT THOSE REWRITE UPDATES I’m so happy. The additional Bakugou and Deku interactions are just *chefs kiss* beautiful. And look at that plot! It’s nice to see some things come full circle, like the Imperial Palace robbery. Are they implying that the perpetrator was Queen Bee? The dragon books are almost certainly for Eir, right? I just noticed that the dragon motif is really strong throughout this fic. Wasn’t Rei’s hero name related to a dragon too? Them parallels tho. Keep up the amazing work! I’ve loved every update so far.

love ur deviation from canon, love that energy, that ability to bounce off established canon and make it better. Rei is such a cool character and it’s a shame she’ll only ever exist in this story right here, because she breathes life into the other characters and makes them more, if that makes sense. Her interactions with the others, and especially tori, really is my favorite part: Anyways I love ur story and am so excited to read more

I don’t usually read stories with an oc as the main character but I was so intrigued by your description that I just had to give it a try. Boy am I glad that I did! I really enjoy your story. Rei is original and her personality is unique in 1-A. I am especially partial to her relationships within the class. That she intrinsically understands Bakugou is refreshing and her empathy with Todoroki is sweet. I also adore big brother Blood King. Love your changes to canon and can’t wait to read what happens next!

I love it and I can't wait for more! Rei and Todoroki's weird blunt interactions are excellent and I love how her and Bakugou somehow vibe on the same frequency. I also love her little moments of 'oh no he's hot' when Todoroki does something cool XD
As for straying from canon- this is fanfiction. If people want something to follow canon exactly, they should go rewatch the show. Express your creativity and keep sharing!

I live for you straying from canon lol so refreshing

Thanks for the hard work love the story _

No need to be nervous you’re doing a great job! Everyone is in character and the building relationship between Rei and everyone is great, you can see the growing bond, Rei and Todoroki’s friendship have me shipping them but the way you write Bakugo is perfection. Personally i love when people stray from cannon it makes things so exciting cause you don’t know what to expect! It’s like having the Manga or Anime with all your favorite characters but with add twist and such so fear not you’re doing awesome