I really like it! Can u pls consider continuing it?

I really loved this story, But I do wish there where more chapter's.

Really like this one! I'm curious about what was in the last drawer of the dresser, or how on earth she could explain away her son's clothes, lol.

...Wrong? I don't see anything wrong with it! This was very well written. The characterization and interactions where very well done, and the way you wrote the scenes gave a clear picture to how things looked. Your grammar was clear and easy to read. I couldn't find a single mistake! The fact that this is your first published story is impressive and shows great talent. Keep up the great work, and always go at your own pace! :) *gives you 2 thumps up*

This is a unique idea and I really enjoyed both the concept and writing of it. It would be great to see a follow up to this :)

yes! people love it! I know i do! it would be really good as a full story though.

LOVED IT the pacing was great and flowed well, and everyone was in character. I love little stories like this :D I'm impressed this is your first published one. It is written very well.

For someone who has a scientific mind, Maddie failed to see the clearish picture, heh.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.