while the Wolfenstein esque picture you have painted is interesting, it's immensely hard to believe, the Nazis in real life were never evil for the sake of being evil, it makes little sense to me why their successors would be so obtusely bad guys for the sake of being bad guys.

I'm still waiting

I really like this fanfic,It's WAY different than the others. Having The germans Killing and torturing The residents and Demi-Humans of Falmart,even the children aswell

I'm excited for the German attack of Italica,It will be a bloodbath,Except if Rory returned quick from killing Don and his soldiers and saving the slaves,then it will be a Battle

that's some good and great dark shit i ever read in gate fic , so i have an idea if you want to take my idea is like this , at first peoples of the falmart see the reich as an evil monster but after like 3-6 month from the arrival of the reich , maybe you can make the fuhrer change his opinion on how he view them like he find out bunny warrior is versatile fighter , and elf is great at marksmanship and etc , so he take them as an auxiliary , but from your previous fuhrer description you make , maybe fuhrer just pick the best out of the best and many as possible but with limit citizenship and the treatment they get is far more better from empire , and for the human i think the same , so they see reich from the different perspective , if you think that's too nice well this fic right? , don't make it like as "nazi" like the real nazi , that's my idea if you want to take for an inspiration? :) , for the update i think if you have a free time use it for write this fic because this fic has a lot of potential :)

i hate rory and all gods. just have nazi goes wolfstein to her, fuck her shitty crap logic anyway.

Wonderful. Loved it. Need more so I can satisfy my sociopathic mind. Keep up the great work. Eagerly awaiting the next update. Cheers.
This is the only story where "Eye for an eye" is kinda (it's more like entire city razed for an eye) true. All other stories are filled with lovey dovey bullcrap about how everything is good and the otherworldly people are okay with savage saderans raping, murdering and all other horrible stuff. Cheers

So ruthless. Like the treatment of demi-humans. It sickens me. But this is just fiction, and I like it because it’s different from the normal fanfics you see from Gate.

Keep going. One problem I have is how you just switch from one scene to another without a line to split em. Gets confusing sometime.

Nice chapters but one problem you are starting to making germans unnecessarily evil it completely ruins the story.
Second of all I didn't like the terrorist scene . killing police in day light is bad for an SS officer and worse for hitler.

If you want discuss about this please PM me

I love how people think Germany could win the Second World War.
But you history ain't friendly my man, Germany could have never won. Especially in the bullshit way you wrote it.

See Himmler was just as fucking Autistic as Hitler so having him in charge would end the same way as with Hitler charge. U.S Army III Corps destroying the German army in the Rhineland, Dresden burned to ash, and the Soviet Flag over Berlin. Strike one mother fucker.

Early in the war the British navy more or less destroyed the German fleet, then went and annihilated the Italian navy, then Sunk the Vichy French navy for good measure. So Britain, especially under Winston Churchill would not have fallen. Strike Two.

The Atomic bomb would never have happened for Germany. See the physicist assigned to the project saw it as a waste of time and put little effort into it. Hell like most of the German higher up saw atomic science as "Jewish Science" and years earlier they expelled the Jewish scientist who were researching atomic science for Germany. So for the Krauts to even get the bomb they would first have to be tolerant of Jews, which flies in the face of what the Nazis stood for. Strike Three.

Your out mother fucker. Go preach the word of Hitler somewhere else.

Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
When can we expect another update from you?
Not my intention of trying to annoy you.
However, I write this poem because all of us love you.
(Posting it on chap 3 because Fanfiction doesn't allows multiple reviews per chapter)

Update?

Dear god...

A very good chapter but please try to use lines (AltEnter) to distinguish P.O.V.

Everyone who’s getting hung up on the animals. It would be fine if they were animals, but they aren’t. The Reich sees them as a bastardized version of the human form, impure. A mutant on the human genetic code. Also Hitler is no longer in power, new leaders are.

About non - humans
1) people with animalistic features should treated fairly because Hitler loves animal and he is first leader who made laws protecting animals
2) I don't care about others(BTW i love your story