i wish i could read the whole story

Ahhhhh I want a full story, pleaseeeee. I want to know what happens after the second encounter

I want a full storyyy!

Atem, Atem, Atem... What else I can say? XD
I love this and I can't believed I noticed this so long after your upload this... *hitting head to the table*
I will definitely read that one in our blog And want read more (was that even a question? XD)
Just keep wondering if the Daydream Industries is that bad as Atem think is it, because Yugi works for it... hmmm.. XD

I'm in love with your AU ! I absolutely love it !
I've read it more than 10 times and I don't get tired ! Yeah I vote for this one, It's so original and funny, I like it.

I'm fascinated by their personalities, Atem looks serious, dominant, a little jealous, and he always think that he has everything under control (until certain moment 3) and I always love when Atem is a gentleman, but for Yugi, I don't have words ! I have no idea when he use his true personality but I know used it (I hope it /3)! He seemed so adorable, submissive and naive but JEEZ in the end I'm feel bad for Atem, that hurts me. I can't believe it, Yugi knew that Atem was being very honest with him and yet he cheated him.

You killed me only with this sentence "He had hoped to see him again after this, not only for sex" OH GOD I can't with this feeling, Atem was so cute and then BOOM a broken heart (even if he doesn't wants to think about it) . After reading it again, it changes the way to see Yugi, Atem's life sounds so lonely, he started to have hope, but now it seems that he will never trust anyone again.

My favorite part was when Yugi was going to sit down but stumbles and Atem holds it by accident and he grabbed... Both reactions were so innocent, I love those little unexpected accidents.

I'm so happy that you have written a chapter for this story!, since I readed the story on Tumblr I always expect to read a little more of them and not only as a Snippet so I can't be more pleased because at least It have a complete chapter even though I felt it everything so fast.

Of course I would be interested to read more about this AU in particular, I think it may have a fantastic plot ahead and would like to know more about Yugi's life in special, it seems that he has an interesting story to tell, How did he end up like this? I wonder a lot. And, thank you very much for such a wonderful work. I'm sorry to send late the review..

This is really awesome! Your writing is amazing as always and your characterizing of Yugi and Atem in this situation are spot on! This would be so fun to read as a full story

LOL I laughed SO much- Devious Yugi...

That was great! Just as the snippet on your tumblr. It was interesting and funny to read, and I think this story has really good potential, if you decide to continue. I also loved "the missing puzzle piece to your heart", and it would be intriguing to see something so different from that.
Keep up the good work,and have fun!

Girl..:::soon as indeed this I'm like wait this sounds familiar and then insaw your. And! Ha! I knew it I knew Yugi wasnpmaying him! And atem is still turned on! Gotta Day-damn this was awsome! Yugi's a t was good and I loved him and Atem
And even more when he turned fierce he resllynis a little tiger but somehow I don't think Yugi works for daydream-he wouldn't work for an evil
Company but he WOULD steal The files copy them and offer to auction it offf to mute highest bidder...hot damn! Off to read part two! This just totally made my evening!

I would love to see this continued, I kind of suspected it with how easy to get Yugi was playing, but wow Yugi is a savage with the selfie and note I wanna see more of savage Yugi.

Oh my gods, this, this! now I need to know what the heck is going to happen, at first I was like "oh, so no lemon?but I just started having a crisis because Yugi! THIS IS SO GOOD! receive my love and have a nice day

Thank you for this fascinating snip of a story, it looks really great and the mystery about why they are where they are really captivated me into this world. Hope you have a nice day.