I'm really enjoying the story so far! Stellagosa and Elegos have such distinct and well-shown personalities that it's easy to see them as realistic beings. I enjoy their interactions with one another, and this chapter did a great job showing how both of them deal with adversity. Rather than just having somebody explain it, you demonstrate it in a rather emotional way, while also using it as a way for them to grow as characters- this is great writing :D

If I had to suggest anything, I'd probably have let Stellagosa and Elegos go on as rivals for a bit- probably for an entire mission before becoming as close as they've become now. I actually noticed in your 'Forbidden Love' story that those main characters also were very quick to get together, when it'd be really cool to see them outside of that for a while. Maybe we could learn how Stellagosa and Elegos interacted as children at some point, or something like that; I think it'd be great to see :)

All in all, this is a great story that's well-written, with very expressive and life-like characters! I'd recommend it to anybody, and I'm very excited to read the upcoming chapters! I know from your other stories that you can weave amazing, varied stories, so I'm excited to see what all Stellagosa and Elegos get into!

As soon as Stellagosa mentioned a partner, I was all, "Ohhh snap" xD I very much enjoyed this story, and once again, your ability to write action scenes is amazing! When I write it, it's the most boring stuff to read, but you're very much able to write it so fluidly, it's very easy to follow and feel engaging!

I'm very excited to see where Stellagosa and Elegos end up, as well. It was very cool for them to start out as rivals; it's very easy for many stories on here to simply get characters developed in an instant, just so they can be lovers and all, but having them start as rivals, I really can't tell how they'll end up, which only adds to the intrigue :D

Overall, a solid introduction, and more so than the two main characters, I'm very excited to learn about this world as well! You did a great job introducing Senegos, and also developing Stellagosa's family, at least beginning to, anyway. I hope you continue writing this, as well as your other stories, and I'll be excited as always to read along! :D

Hey everyone! Since my other dragon story is taking the characters through Azsuna, I thought it would be fun to have a sidestory with different characters and themes.

This story will be more action-packed and adventurous than my other story but hopefully they will both turn out great! If you want to see more on this story, send me a private message and I'll try to get back to work as soon as possible. For now I'm trying to go back to work on my original story. Let me know what you think!