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AmandaH109 chapter 4 . 7/28/2019 Great story, I loved it. I don't know why but I just love season 1 stories. It was obvious from the start that they were meant to be together. I watch every season hoping it will be this one, and when they don't get together I feel angry. Sometimes I feel that maybe they're never gonna let them be together, even though you can clearly see the chemistry between them. I know they're married now in real life but if they didn't want us shipping them why do they keep letting them have those moments that they always seem to have. Thanks for the story, I've really enjoyed it so far. |
tristanrayne chapter 1 . 8/9/2018 why do you have double arrows around where he hey are speaking?you had it like this earlier" not a complaint just curious |
Sunkissu9 chapter 4 . 8/2/2018 Yay! You're back! |
Ellen-Thalia chapter 5 . 7/4/2018 This was a great chapter. Your variations are so on point and in character. I loved seeing Bellamy being protective of Clarke in small ways and I loved Well's reaction to both the radio and finding out about his father. I hope you can find a way to fit the "You always did what you had to, to protect your sister. That's who you are." conversation in to this fic somewhere, because I think that was an important moment for Bellamy - him realising that Clarke understands him. You could do with checking on some wording and grammar I think, a Beta read might help (you may consider this me offering my services). Did you mean 'Drawn to You' with your title suggestion, not 'Drown'? I'm assuming you did, and I think that title may be slightly cheesy, but I think you could probably come up with something better than One Person's Actions too. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
bellarketrashhh chapter 3 . 8/29/2017 UGH I really hate Finn and Clarke, but I really like protective Wells! God of course Bellamy gets pulled into a tent like why can't he just realize Clarke is his wife? I hate when Bellamy sleeps with randoms it makes me sad :( |
bellarketrashhh chapter 2 . 8/29/2017 Omg this was so good! :) I when either of them gets jealous it's so cute |
bellarketrashhh chapter 1 . 8/29/2017 I can't wait to see where this story goes! You're off to a good start :) |
Seven chapter 2 . 8/28/2017 Continue the story please... and please dont make it a slowburn |
12 chapter 2 . 8/27/2017 Great work I'll definitely be reading this |
Dead or alive chapter 2 . 8/27/2017 I like it, it can go so many ways from here, I wonder what will happen from here |
Devientity chapter 1 . 8/26/2017 Definitely worth the continue. Not enough ideas where Wells survives |
12 chapter 1 . 8/25/2017 Interesting idea continue if you like I might keep up with it |