Hey, still waiting for an update! Would love to see the story continue!

awesomesauce!

I will include extra info, you can leave out or change anything you want about my character, I would prefer you made them a villain, but you could leave out the villainous part of their personality, make them older, and make them something else, if they're not a villain, I imagine that they'd be quite shy and caring

Name: Bethany Whitehill
Nickname: Bonnie
Hero/Villain name: Buttons
Age: young child
Gender: female
Sexuality: bisexual (when older)
Quirk name: Material Manipulation
Quirk type: ESP?
Quirk description: can control fabric, including clothes, teddy bears, and individual threads, does pretty much nothing for defence, so she makes up for it with overpowering offensive capabilities- can be used to slice off limbs if used right, needs practically no effort or energy on her part, she uses it to capture enemies and to swing/crawl around- kind of like a mix between Spider-Man's webs and Child Emperor's (one punch man) metal spider limbs, only a LOT more threads grabbing onto buildings, the ground, etc.
Weapons/Gadgets: none, but her room has teddy bears EVERYWHERE for her to break into threads to attack you if you try to attack or capture her
Eyes: big, black, 'innocent'
Hair: white-cream coloured, long, straight, smooth, in pigtails- tyed by black lace, curled at the bottom
Height: very short
Build: thin ,frail {looking}
Other: large hands with long thin fingers, pale greyish-brown skin
Standard clothes: white fluffy jumper- much too big for her, black crop top, black leggings, white trainers, pale pink trainer socks
Costume: white fluffy suit that looks like a one piece (only fluffy) with black fluff lining the neck and the bottom of the suit knee/elbow length fluffy black boots/gloves with white pads on the soles/palms, big pale pink button lined with black fluff covers most of the stomach, white fluffy bunny tail (costume modelled after 'Beary'- her favourite teddy bear)
Night: white fluffy onsie with bear ears on the hood- much too big for her, black zip, pale pink pads on the hands and feet, usually has 'Beary' with her at night
Swim: white one piece with black frills around the neck and the legs, big pale pink heart on the chest, pink hair tyes
Formal: a puffy white sleeveless dress tyed with a big pink ribbon around the waist- ends in a big pink bow at the back, layers look like white flower petals blending into black as they get lower down, long white gloves, hair loose with small pink and black flowers scattered in it
Personality: insane, obsessive, very stubborn, a child with the mind of an adult (in fights), is prone to having childish fits of rage, very protective of quirkless people (explained later) Personality: (she has two) calm, caring, mature, very shy, earnest, endearing
Likes:Beary'- her teddy bear, children (kidnaps them to play with her and her teddys), Best Jeanist (although she's a villain), fluffy things
Dislikes: loneliness, rules, heros, FIRE (phobia)- explanation later
Type of person they would-
Fall for: someone she'd find adorable, shy, (literally Izuku Midoria)
Befriend: she'd want to be friends with anyone her age or someone she finds shy and adorable, she shows her other personality to people her age and people she's fond of
Hate: someone cocky and full of themselves
Respect: someone powerful, someone who's willing to put up with her and be her friend
Rival: someone in love with/ the closest friend of someone who she wants to be friends with
Hobbies/skills: playing make-believe, sewing, designing outfits, making elaborate desserts, knows first aid, team medic (sews up wounds)
How they would act-
Towards romantic interests: slightly controlling, cutesy, very protective, fusses over them a lot
Towards acquaintances: looks down on them
Towards friends/close friends: the same as they would act towards romantic interests (though not as strongly)
Towards Rivals: full of disdain
Towards enemies: will immediately try to start a fight
Towards respected figures: if she likes them, she'll go full adorable little girl on them, if she doesn't like them, she'll try to make them look bad, like when no-one's looking she'll fall down and cry saying they hit her for annoying them, or something like that
Towards family/people in their history: they're all dead (explanation later)
Towards strangers: if they look interesting, she'll try to befriend them, if they don't, she'll act like they're below her
Under extreme pressure: they get nervous, and don't go in guns blazing as they usually do
When facing their fears: paralysed with fear, flashbacks (what of explained later)
When mortified/angry/depressed,etc.: extremely aggressive
Past: while they and their family were on holiday, their hotel burned down (due to a mistake made by a hero with a fire quirk who was fighting a villain) while they were still in it, she was the only one who escaped alive other than her quirkless older brother, who committed suicide three days later (hence the fire phobia, her dislike of heros in general and her protectiveness of quirkless people)

It's a nice way to begin a fight. Lots of tension, I like it! There are a lot of characters introduced but it didn't really bother me so it's fine! I'd like to see how the fight with the magnetic quirk and Jennifer go! Will the heroes win? Or would they lose?

Love to see the next chapter! Good luck and have fun writing!

Sweet chapter. Did you know that under normal conditions plasma tends to cool within seconds? This is the reason why plasma cutters can't fire a stream of plasma like say Godzilla, the only reason why plasma doesn't disperse while inside say a Tokamak is due to a magnetic field that helps it keep it's shape which is what I'm assuming is what allows Jennifer to launch plasma attacks. Now considering she's up against a female Magneto, someone able to manipulate a fundamental force of the universe, this means that using plasma attacks may not be the brightest of ideas. Depending on how effective this magnetism Quirk is and it's overall range will depend on what will happen, if its strong enough to out right turn off am objects magnetic field then that means she can disperse the plasma before it can even hit her and if she can merely manipulate the field then there is a large possibility of her sending the plasma right back at them. Anyway I'm interested in how some of these fights will turn out, good luck with the story.

Okay, not bad. Looks like an interesting training session. I did have to reread the chapter a few times to get what was going on. There were so many new characters things were a bit tough to follow, though I understand your desire to get them all into the story.

Hey, loved the chapter, great job with everyone thus far. I'm looking forward to the coming fights next chapter. One thing I do want to offer is a bit of clarification about Alex's powers. His powers basically work like multiplication. The higher he goes multiply wise, the shorter the duration of his strength. 2 Times his normal strength he could hold for 8 hours if he rested that long. However, if he went further he could go 4 times his normal strength for 4 hours, or 8 times his strength for 2 hours. So this chapter you mentioned he had about 8 minutes left. That means he could go 2 times his normal strength for that long, or continue to multiply his power but at the risk of running out of time. I just wanted to clarify his power before his potential fight scene. Anyway, great chapter, keep goin and stay golden

So we now get to the second half of the beginning. Great job introducing who I assume are going to be the main cast of the story for the most part. The Hero Vs Villains thing is an interesting concept that you will hopefully execute well and the new characters introduced are all so different from each other and will definitely be memorable. Their quirks are all so interesting and their costumes so eye catching. Now as for Walter... wow... the fact that you mentioned something I wanted to include (that he is gentlemanly) but couldn't due to FFs word count is actually really surprising. It shows that you have an understanding of what I was going for when creating him. Also props for noting that he has a accent Not really that important but something I found incorrect with how you described Walter was how he wore a blue suit. He is only wearing a blue suit-vest... the whole suit isn't blue. There is the grey pants and the white dress shirt...maybe you could mention this later idk. Other than that this was a solid chapter and a good introduction to some other main characters.

omg i love the principle sm...i hope to see more of him in the future! i assume these r the main cast unless there r some villains were missing out on but i doubt it. some of these characters have some real interesting quirks too. In other news:

Wow you are pumping out these chapters QUICK dont be afraid to take ur time dude! I think making something satisfied with is what is important here (although than u r faced w/ the problem of too much lallygagging and ur readers r expected to be blown away or they forget it exists etc)

I'm liking the quirk we've seen so far, as some really caught my eye. I'll try and see if can send in another OC or two

Oh! My OC made it in!
Anywho, I'm excited to see how the rest of the exercise goes! My main issue is that it's pretty hard to remember everyone's names and quirks. It may have been better to introduce the characters a bit slower.

Getting into the action. I will look forward to the next part of these battles.

Super great chapter and looking forward to the next! Thank you for making my character the way I wanted him to be :)

You have a few oversized paragraphs in the first half. You should do something to break them up a bit.

Good chapter, we got to see some training as well as the introductions of several characters. I hope to see more soon, keep goin and stay golden