interesting

this left me wanting more. one hundred percent i found myself enthralled by dark!tedromeda. andromeda is so perfectly poisonous and ted seems to be so manipulative in his own way. what a good read!

dark dark dark give me all the dark couples thank you

ohhhh! This Ted! ;o I like that they didn't kill Reg and Barty! And Andromeda as evil ween is my thing (y)

Your feedback from Hogwarts for Assignment 2 (Duelling Lessons)

Your Grade: 20/20 (O)
Your Examiner: Sophie (The Screaming Faeries)
Your Feedback:

This was AMAZING. At first I thought both characters were going to be totally dark. To be honest, I don't see this as a Dark!AU. I can imagine Andromeda being like this before, perhaps, Ted's kindlier personality rubs off on her. All the characters were amazing. You added subtle characteristics that were heavy at the same time - Bellatrix's madness, Narcissa's love - and I didn't miss the BartyRegulus you snuck in there too, cheeky!

This was so original. I've read Royalty!AUs before, but this really felt like more of a medieval Royalty!AU; I had vibes of Game of Thrones and the Hunger Games merged into one. I've never read anything like this before.

The story flow was great. All the page breaks were in the right places, and I like that you went for shorter, more dramatic paragraphs, as opposed to longer standing ones. The dialogue was appropriate for the AU that you used.

Prompt was used perfectly. Initially I was concerned that you were going to use it literally, but I can see that you developed a good understanding of the prompt to use it so creatively.

Overall, this story blew me away. I have no qualms giving you full points, it was amazing! I spotted no SPaG errors! Really great work!

ooh, this is really lovely I can definitely see how Sophie became obsessed with it and why she cursed your name :p
I really loved your take on the whole dark!ted/andromeda, and this au seems delicious It kind of reminds me of a mix between the hunger games and game of thrones for some reason... or at least something game of throne-ish :p (to be fair there's probably about the same amount of incest among the blacks than in got :p)
And I do agree with Sophie - I'd love to know more about what happens to Barty and Regulus, cause it sounds like Andromeda and Ted have plans for them
Nice work!
Cheers ;)

Not going to lie, this is not at all what I expected. But that's a good thing because this absolutely exceeded my expectations and also probably made me obsessed with this AU. I've never thought about Ted (or Andromeda) in that way before and it was lovely to see this new look at them.
I adored this and must leave you with many thanks :)