| Reviews for Morai's gamble |
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Stratos263 chapter 1 . 3/30/2018 Good job on the start. |
Eurigos chapter 1 . 11/27/2017 This is pretty interesting, I look forward to more chapters |
Just to Suffer chapter 1 . 9/13/2017 whelp fuck I forgot |
StoryReiter chapter 1 . 9/6/2017 ...3 Archers in the war, wait, he has possible leftovers of knowledge from Archer's Arm.. OHOHOHOHOHOH THIS IS GONNA BE FUN, A FAKER HAS ENTERED THE BATTLE ROYAL! What's more, Mordred's there! Thank thank you thank you! I am honestly looking forward to more. There would be an interesting dynamic in the master and servant relationship as well as the characters. Have a good day and take care author. Might be weird an off topic but I wonder what would Ruler see in Shirou if given the revelation skill. Thanks again |
ArcherEMIYA chapter 1 . 9/5/2017 I went onto the fate wiki site to look at her stats and everything checked out. She is an archer a LONG RANGE fighter so low strength makes sense, she's not meant to fight up close, her endurance also makes sense archers tended to stay in one place, usually up high to have the best view and target area of a battle field, only moving when needed, like when there targeted themselves or when an enemy gets too close for comfort, that said they also had to move fast in order to get enough space between them and there target in a short amount of time hence the A rank agility for her. Explanation over: That all being said i bet the servants and masters are gonna be surprised with shirous magecraft borderline true magic if he ever get's forced to use it. Also ShirouXAtalanta pairing? You do you man. P.S. Anyone else think reality marbles should be considered true magic in the case of humans. I mean creating a WORLD from a mental image. How can that not be a true magic, science can't do that! |
ATK-49 chapter 1 . 8/30/2017 It's nice to see shirou in apocrypha. But atlanta? Her stats suck. I'm not really asking for artoria but Atlanta? Either way I'm curious to see where you go with this. Keep writing |
char chapter 1 . 8/26/2017 Love this can't wait for more |
Just to Suffer chapter 1 . 8/26/2017 Good good, though I feel like you should have modified the chant a little for an Archer class. The "sword" part made me think he was trying to summon a saber |
Bloody Hero chapter 1 . 8/23/2017 This is interesting I've always wanted to see Shirou in Fate Apocrypha. I'm hoping that Archer's arm properly assimilated with Shirou and thus Shirou is capable of doing all he was during in Heaven's Feel without having to rip his mind to bloody pieces. Well he'll certainly be a interesting addition to Fate Apocrypha world looking forward to how he acts and even more reactions of those around him. You know it's just going to be a matter of time before he fights off a Servant or does something equally insane succeeding when he should have died. If there is something I have to comment on I suppose I must say I'm surprised he went with the Catalyst he was given and summoned Atlanta. Nothing against her of course but considering Shirou's abilities he probably could have summoned a stronger Servant, I realize due to HF scenario his options are a bit limited but he still has access to Arturia and Hercules. All he has to do is use Avalon or trace Hercules weapon which was said to be made from his own tomb and he could have summoned them. Well just a thought anyway, the relationship between Atlanta and Shirou should be interesting of itself and compatibility should be good between them due to his cooking and his kindness. Considering Shirou's househusband tendencies in his off time it should make quite the impact since men of ancient Greece were a lot more for lack of a better word "rough" in general. Looking forward to Shirou meeting other members of Red faction more specifically Shirou Kotomine, Semiramis, Kairi Sisigou, and Mordred. Things should be REALLY interesting there. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2017 Shirou/Atlanta combo ayy I will keep my eyes on this one |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2017 Nice story though so he retains all his memories and somehow he gets himself a job working for mages and to participate in the war, though is archer arm still there and if not so do you think with training shirou could use reality marble. |
Just some guy chapter 1 . 8/22/2017 I thoroughly enjoyed all stories of yours that I have read. This one is no different to any of the others, except that I am familiar with Nasuverse. Your writing is very well structured, please continue this story. |
lordorphen17 chapter 1 . 8/24/2017 nice :D |
AladdinlSane chapter 1 . 8/24/2017 Great chapter So does Kairi still summon Saber? |
NIGRIS chapter 1 . 8/24/2017 I love it, I love all of it! Is it going to be Shirou X Atlanta? |