Ive been waiting on an update for quite some time now this story is realy good please keep going

Man, that ending sequence brought a large smile to my face. And are we actually getting an Adam Taurus redemption plot point in a well written story? Will wonders never cease?

Excellent story so far, hope you stop playing Fortnite 6 hours a day and start writing again. Or anything else really. Six hours of fortnite a day, what an absolute waste of time.

While i think it was definitely a clever way to prove Jaune is from the future, and yea sure the greater good and all that, holy shit was that a fucking terrible thing to do to your niece. Poor Ruby.

I always love stumbling across opening chapters like this; chapters that are so above and beyond what you normally find on this site. Fantastic introduction to your story, even if im feeling a bit sick and sad about the ending. Feel terrible for Jaune.

Author fiat to have the raven plot line so you could keep the stations of canon and not stop amber. Pathetic attempts are so easy to see. What’s the point of time travel? This is just an of/so wish fulfillment for the author with no plot changes

Such a puzzy dear lord is this actually a time travel fic? Went down to raven in 5 seconds without her even using her maiden powers? And you realize her portals aren’t that fast

He’s a hunter with aura, a rope would NOT break rips. Not without your author fiat

This chapter had me dying at the end with all the butterfly effects XD

Please come back to this. I'v missed it so much. The writing style is great and the plot is really good for a time travel fic.

Update ya cunt

...He didn’t just make a butterfly effect, he shat out a whole damn BUTTERFLY DEATHSWARM! This, this makes things MUCH harder.

Your story is absurdly depressing.

It made me fucking scream. Thanks.

I really hope team jnpr is still form n not just have adam plug into it haha...or he replace ruby since looks like roman wont be doing the heist...maybe to adhere somewhat to the time line jaune takes his younger self and ruby as his apprentice to get them in beacon and also get his younger self up to his level fast since they are the same person so he can develope his younger self faster...plus ilove jnpr dynamics...n having adam being leader of rwby seems funny too haha

It's really good. Like painfully good. Are you dead? Cause if you aren't I could probably wait another year or three for the next part. Have fun til you post next! I'll be waiting.

If you need a grammar beta still, I could do that too.

That certainly explains why Weiss was ensuring that they knew the plan, memorized it. Poor Weiss and Ruby, though. Poor Jaune, as well, since it seems he's all alone now.