I love your story so far. The warg pack is awesome and I can’t wait to see how they progress, as well as Sesshomaru coming back to life in a way. I kinda hope he gets a body again, but I’m okay with the idea of him just staying as his mokomoko. Will Kagome’s story continue all the way to The Lord of the Rings or will it stop in The Hobbit? I hope you are doing well, and I can’t wait to read more.

Loved it! Can’t wait to read more!;) I like the agreement between Elrond and Raven. Her friendship with Thranduil is pretty neat.

Hello Voltaire's Writer,
I hope life is treating you well. Your writing has intrigued me and I would like to read more. I look foward to Thranduil battling orcs with Kagome. Thank you for writing this story,
Willow Wisp

i love that warg pack!

Kagome is probably older than 100yrs right? Least i think so... Lol but it's cute her brothers love monopolize her and them being jealous when she's not with them is too adorable!

I was hope for a Narto crossover ,but this is so far so good. Keep up the good work.

Guess the Warg's will now be Rivendell's guardians, they could patrol the surrounding areas around Rivendell. After all its now their home.

wargs! now just really big wolf pups! not the I'm complaining. when i was very little a wolf saved my life and took me back to humans. So I guess I'll always have a special place inside for wolves. plus I've always hated ratial based alignments. So this is two kinds of nice to me. not so sure about that conversation but meh. dogs are smart. wolves are smart. why not have giant magical(and all around enhanced from regular wolves) wolves be smarter? Maybe now they won't look so mangy though. I've never seen a canine that was actually natural for. It indicates shoddy care to say the least. Probably because of constantly having to fight and not eating well. Wolves are only "vicious" when they have to be. Stories of little children saved by wolves aren't all that unusual. Just it sounds unbelievable because so often people think wolves must be vicious thoughtless killers without questioning what proof they actually have of that. My secret is- that thing we discussed- sometimes I wonder if that isn't why rather than similar experience. or maybe both. Then again I was strange from the beginning. It happens though. Some even think it may be part of how we got dogs. As long as your not threatening wolves and leave at least part of a kill behind for them while in there territory(an old hunters rule-I'm not so sure "modern" hunters know such respects nor the benefit of doing so)... wolves are usually content to live and let live. They rarely go for humans and then it's usually the humans fault. coyotes on the other hand... they will take off with small children and animals right at your feet- to eat them. Coyotes though... are more like carion than wolves. Anyway. enough going on and on. I've always loved wolves and hated alignments based on "race" or even partial race instead of individual choices so I enjoyed that especially. The idea wargs are inherently evil or MUST serve goblins with none running free somewhere... it's always bothered me. Thankyou for that here.I hope you update soon.

she's gonna me messed deeply for the rest of her life. people won't always see it but the nightmares for something like that never stop either nor does it ever not hurt. your always aware the empty places that should hold them. Always. A heart gets bigger the more it loves but no one ever replaces anyone who has been loved by that heart nor is this sort of thing something you do anything but learn to keep surviving through. living. that's the hard part. and there is a difference. either way its something carried with you, a shadow no one can see but your all to aware of-left behind haunting you. Considering for her it was her entire clan and siblings too... I really hope you don't try to pull the "all better now kagome" trope I've seen so many young writters do. Trust me. Some things are never ok and that's ok as long as you never give up and drown in it instead of face it. burrying it doesn't lead to anything but a bubbling emotions waiting to drown you in themselves one day- because they have been left to build instead of dealt with. fortunately- there are many ways to do that. i hope you realize if you pull "all better kagome" it's entirely unrealistic to extremes. Some things never get better. you just survive to become strong enough to carry them. that doesn't mean it ever hurts less or gets easier. it just means you compose yourself and keep walking carrying the empty spaces with you always.

Poor Kagome. Now she's getting another chance. Least her clans spirits and that of her families spirits will always be with her. I know they are watching over her. I wonder what'll happen next and how will Kagome handle what's to come in the future.

To bad that I don't know what the heck is going on because I haven't read the first part, but the details are very nice in this story. Except, sometimes you will write dialogue with no dialogue verbs, like said, exclaimed, resonded...things like that.