Please continue!

Wow I am loving this so much. I really appreciate the effort you have obviously put in to researching the history and cannon and staying true to them. I also appreciate the author's notes at the end where you explain your thinking. I want to do the same things in my own writing, we should be friends. There were a couple spots where I had a little trouble following the character's reasoning maybe being a bit more explicit in explaining thought process or adding a bit more detail to the dialogue? Overall though a wonderful story so far that I had a hard time putting down. Keep up the good work.

So I just found your story and read what you have all the way through. :) I'm very much enjoying it. Poor Atem - I am glad you didn't drag the 'bastard son of Ra' thing out too long, since I think it might have been too tangential. Still I love the writing and the style and the way that their relationships are developing all over again. I'm also looking forward to when Atem tells Yuugi what's really going on.

I'm also kinda wondering what's up with Ryou ;) Mysteries are good.

Anyway, great job so far, and I'm looking forward to more.

Really liking this so far. Can't wait to see what will happen next. I laughed when Atem threw his punch. Have a good one!

I love this s far please keep writing33

Seriously good fic so far, I really like the detailyou've gone into with the research for this, which shows through. I look forward to seeing how the story unfolds.