| Reviews for The Tale of Ren |
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Hypervene chapter 5 . 6/25 Ren: "I don't have hubris, not like you" Also Ren: "I will master death" Hope collecting the Hallows doesn't have some sorta compulsion effect on Lee. Would be dramatic, sure, but would make me uneasy. |
Hypervene chapter 3 . 6/25 "Slow campaigns, leading toward the madness of the intended victim, are more your area of expertise than mine" Uh, Ren, I don't think Kakashi was doing that to you on purpose. At least, at first... "The art of being nee-san" Y'know, it makes sense that Kakashi would be such a siscon. It just slots perfectly into his character. Wow, Ren is dead set on Lee being his wife. Chapter 2 was painful to read; I'm not sure I could bear reading another like it. Ren's pretty well-adjusted otherwise, for a ninja at least. |
Sandungera chapter 5 . 5/4 I don't even know why I enjoy this so much...It has such a fun flavor of off-the-rails 'I write what I want' spice, but it takes itself seriously...I love it, lmao. Your characterizations are intriguing and different enough to catch the eye, but not so much that I'm in disbelief of the actions of the canon characters. It's really sweet too, the way you highlight Tom/Ren's more human qualities that so many fics like to sweep under the rug. Whether you ever write another chapter of this again or not, I've had so much joy derived from reading this story. |
HashtagJustMonika chapter 3 . 3/9 Loved the ending:) |
Mernom chapter 5 . 9/4/2019 Very nice story. |
Mernom chapter 3 . 9/3/2019 An alternative form of time travel that doesn't actually has to deal with time travel: instead of going back in time in your own world, go to an alternative reality that's 100% identical to yours, but has started 10 minutes later. Or, however much you need. This also avoids any potential paradoxes (like Lee not being with the Deruslies since Voldemort wasn't a thing). |
Mernom chapter 2 . 9/3/2019 Wait one second. Why doesn't Lee just make a 'Reliable Translation Lee' clone? Based on 'Emotional Support Lee', the clones gain whatever skills they need to fulfill their role even if the original doesn't have them (AKA, any form of social skills in this case), so the clone should have a good grasp of contextual translation. |
sam chapter 5 . 8/6/2019 absolutely loved this! |
Shion Lee chapter 5 . 7/12/2019 I absolutely love this version of kakashi |
125b chapter 5 . 6/26/2019 Poor grindelwald |
AdaDiya chapter 5 . 6/16/2019 Woohoo for Ren! |
AdaDiya chapter 3 . 6/16/2019 So good! Love it |
AdaDiya chapter 2 . 6/16/2019 Awwww. I love Tom's character! |
AdaDiya chapter 1 . 6/16/2019 Love that Tom gets found early! |
4Dpuyopuyo chapter 5 . 4/8/2019 Oh boy this is good. I love Grindewald’s character, and Ren is so believably Tom riddle growing up in Konoha. I’m loving this |