This was a really fun read! You’ve got Yusuke’s captured perfectly.

Thanks for sharing!

I really liked this fic, I think you have the potential to write more of YYH and of course YusKei ones. They were so in character and Yusuke funny as always.

Not quite what I was expecting, but a fun read regardless.

entertaining story :)

I love reading fics exploring Yusuke and Keiko's feelings during middle school, and you've given it to me so nicely! Spot-on characterization of both of them. Daisuke was also a nice addition. I hope you'd write more YusKei fics!

omg I loved this! You had absolutely no reason to be nervous about posting your writing, this was great! Everyone was very in character, especially Yusuke, and you handled the progression of his anxiety and his realization very well. And I just love love the ending, its perfect. Thank you for writing!

Beyond perfection T_T I really reeeally love this couple and I'm sad when I don't find enough content of them. They're ending up like one of my fav otps forever! I will fight for them! *tears*

Please, keep writing more like this. I loved the interaction between Yusuke and Keiko even Kuwabara was in character. I don't know what more to say...

It goes to my favs!

I LOVED this! There definitely aren't enough good Yusuke/Keiko fics out there, so thanks for writing a great one!

Holy crap, this was amazing. I couldn't put this down. Yusuke, Keiko, Kuwabara and even Principal Takanaka were so amazingly in character. I love how this capture Yusuke's and Keiko's relationship beautifully. I could feel Yusuke's anxiety as I kept reading. Good job on this and I hope to see you participate in the next Big Bang.

love it

I wanted to give a little love here too while I add this fic to my faves. It's such a good Yusuke/Keiko fic. It's just as good as their canon kiss at the end of the series. I'd be happy with the ship if this was the canon. 3 3

You got a handle on Yusuke and Keiko, and wrote their relationship so well! I literally read every single line of Yusuke's in Justin Cook's voice, kudos!