Link

O my Primus that was awesome!
Please please please right more!

You have an amazing way of hitting the emotions for those reading, and I love that about your writing, Precious. Other than timing being off a bit, perhaps, and formal address for royal members (King and Queen should be addressed as Majesty); I see great work here. Well done, Love!

What an intriguing change of events. I like the twist!

Details are improving - I like that, but there is still much work to be done. I encourage you to continue, and to examine the potential you have begun and sparked.

The story takes a turn here in Chapter IV. While the idea is still sound - the reactions seem over the top, but it could just be Ghirahim showing his hand already. Still has excellent potential for a first draft, and simply needs polish.

The story continues to show promise for a first draft. My only thought is more details, but other than that it continues to make me want more.

This story continues to show great potential. For a first draft - it is good quality.

This story is a good one, I wonder why you stopped writting it, Its a shame, I hope you could update soon

I love your story Eden and your style of writing. Since I found your story I've read it three times and I'm very interested in what's going to happen next with things between Link and Zelda and Zelda and Girahim. I've also come up with different ideas about the mysteries surrounding Link and why he can't speak and absolutely can't wait to find out more about his past.
Please continue writing this story. You have a real talent for story telling :) :)

Like you, I haven't actually played any Zelda games, but I've watched my husband play them a lot. They interest me and after he started playing Breath of the Wild I started looking up fanfiction and I'm so happy I came across yours! I do like it when Link talks, but doesn't talk much. In the games he does "sort of" talk when interacting with other people since players are given options of what to say/ask, we just never hear his voice. However, I like how you explained that he did talk before and now he just doesn't. Maybe that means he'll talk again? Can't wait to keep reading and find out!

I am love Love loving this story! Please continue!

Ahhhhhh, I want them to be together so badly, theyre such a beautiful couple!

this fanfiction is literally the best one i have ever read in my entire lifei am looking forward to see you update another chapter

This was absolutely superb! I wasn’t able to put down my phone after reading the first chapter. Please keep continue writing! Looking very forward to the next chapter. :) definitely going to follow and favourite this story!