Reviews for Akko Kagari and the White Witch
bauers374 chapter 9 . 3/20
Let me guess, Master Noah has Deadman Syndrome?
bauers374 chapter 6 . 3/20
Does Diana have the Time Stone now?
grifman275 chapter 22 . 2/8
This was an absolute joy to read, just like the first two stories in the series! I binge read both in one night, and I read through this story in one sitting because it had my utmost attention.

If were to have one critique of the series though, it would be the sheer amount of characters from other series mentioned in this world. There is nothing wrong with it, but for those who may or may have not seen a lot of the series that some of these come from, it can get a bit confusing sometimes.

I do hope Amon gets what's coming to him. Hopefully he gets exposed just like he did in Korra. Oh, I can imagine it now, it could be like the scene from Order of the Phoenix where Voldemort is battling Dumbledore for a bit too long and gets seen by the council. Although, I'll be reading the next book in the series and I don't know what happens to him in the next book, and the scenario i just described is probably saved for the big bad of the series, and not just a servant of the big bad. But it would be cool nonetheless and it would resemble how he was exposed in Korra.

I would love to see more family fluff between Izetta and Akko, but I have a feeling she is gonna die in the fifth book if this series Parrells Harry Potter's plot guidelines. Although, you have shown to steer away from HP's plot structure with things like Aradia being made up, Akko's Malfoy substitute being a friend, Barbara being manipulated( which kind of resembles Ginny Weasley being manipulated to open the Chamber). So I do hold hope for Izetta's survival, but I doubt it wild happen unless someone close to Akko steps in for Izetta.

As for Chariot's sickness, I suspect it will have to be cured by Lyonne, which I presume is the strongest healing spell I can think of.

As for the big bad, well I have some suspicions. Crawford Seam must be working for them for sure. Going by all the Fairy Tail references in this story, it wouldn't be in character if that coward wasn't a traitor. Now who he is working for, that's the question. I don't think Tartaros is the big bad in this story like it was for their arc in Fairy Tail, but I can see them making an appearance. Jellal could also be a candidate. If this is the under possession magic version of Jellal, then it's certainly possible for him to be part of the conspiracy. He has the cunning, smarts, and charisma to organize plots. Salem from RWBY could be a candidate. I think I remember her being mentioned as one of the 9 witches if my memory serves me. She could be a fallen angel of sorts, trying to plot humanities downfall and found a way to live a long time like she does in RWBY. It would also make Cinder and Ruvik as underlings a good choice. Cinder is one in RWBY, and from what the limited knowledge of Ruvik I have from briefly playing Evil Within, he's a complete sadist, which would go nicely with the Grimm queen. Acnologia could be a potential suspect, but I think he's more the one for brute force and power than elaborate long term schemes. Sauron and Zeref are good, but they are locked up if I read right, but they seem to obvious because they were mentioned prominently.

Or it can be a character from another series that I don't know, because there are so many mentioned in these stories that it could be one I overlooked because of ignorance of them when they were mentioned by name.
grifman275 chapter 5 . 2/7
Too bad this was written before the Apathy were revealed in RWBY, because those would definitely be good dementor substitutes.
Yellowpikmin88 chapter 6 . 2/16/2019
So now we've got a a fairy tail character joining the group. And having Wendy outshine Diana was an good choice since it'll be interesting to see her swallow her pride for once. Unfortunately it looks like we've found our Buckbeak situation as well. Poor Wendy
The Time Traveler chapter 22 . 2/11/2019
I am liking this parody so far. Nice work and I like how you worked everything out in it.

I am looking forward to when Akko knows the truth. Well. I will be reading the next one sooner than you can imagine. Keep up the good work.
Yellowpikmin88 chapter 5 . 2/7/2019
Wow, the Heartless. What a great substitute for Dementors.
Yellowpikmin88 chapter 3 . 2/5/2019
What a twist making Holbrooke Lotte's grandma.
Yellowpikmin88 chapter 1 . 2/4/2019
And we're off. The third book is one fo my favourites so I'm looking forward to it.
TheFlyCatt chapter 22 . 6/5/2018
LOL I have read all this without knowing that this was the 3rd sequel of the fic series D: maybe you should add that to the sumary ;w; so newcomers know that this isn't only 1 fanfic (maybe you said it in the A. notes and I didn't notice it ;wI guess I'll go to read the two past fics. It was nice to read :D
AevumAce chapter 22 . 3/24/2018
I can't believe I finished this! Even though I know how it would end, I like the changes you did from the original. The ending where the villain was revealed wasn't much of a twist for me maybe because I watched LoK; however, I like the idea that Aradia doesn't exist at all. I am very much excited for the development of Dianakko because the way you wrote about them leading up to their puberty was enjoyable! Maybe I am just a sucker for adventure and fantasy with a dash of gay romance. I also liked the creative decision where you made Izetta a Du Nord and how you made Professor Finnelan a sympathetic character. Kudos to you! Looking forward to the rest!
PrincessArien chapter 5 . 2/2/2018
Heh, with all of the talk about Dol Guldor in the previous stories and earlier on here I had been thinking you would have used the Nazgul. But Heartless definitely work pretty well, probably better in some ways.
PrincessArien chapter 2 . 2/1/2018
Oh yes, I think you did quite well with making her a quite hate-able character...not much redeeming traits in that one.
And I have to say, love how tongue-in-cheek this series can get sometimes when you either directly or indirectly reference the original plot from Harry Potter or hang a lampshade on what happened in the Harry Potter plot has been subverted.
Though I think probably the most fun I have is spotting all of the countless references to other manga/anime, it makes the world feel much more alive and lived in, plus references and shout-outs to other works are always loads of fun to begin with (especially with the series I know and are one of my favorites, like with Girls und Panzer in this chapter for instance).
Tobi chapter 22 . 12/3/2017
Dear Red-Reef, all I can say is that you are the best writer of Fanfiction, I have ever known. I have more words to describe your brilliance but they are better vocal. instead I will sum it up in numbers. 1000/10. I love your Akko Kagari series so much. Keep up the good work. :) Sincerly a fan.
Kaiju Alpha chapter 22 . 12/1/2017
What are you gonna use for the dragon in the next series? Because I have two ideas:

1. Smaug: He could toy with her about her aspirations of being a witch.

2. Bryagh: He kinda needs more love and he's just as brutal as the Horntail.
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