Thoroughly enjoyed this. Hope you make the sequel

Awesome

This fic is severely underrated. Seriously.

God I absolutely love this. It's so amazing!

All of the speech is so formal it's throwing me off

Not sure if you meant the hidden stone village or the hidden cloud because you have both listed

You have failed your grade 9 grammar test. Please try again next year

Dude. Pettable actually is a word. Look it up.

You meant dog... Doge isn't a word. You might have been closer if you were looking for doggy. That's also not a word but is widely accepted as one.

Wear not where

Weiss is the worst IMHO.

Why do you repeat stuff that's in the same sentence? It's so redundant is not even funny. Please fix this soon. It would make it easier to read

Sucking on a venom wound is a common misconception, sure it would remove the lighter layer of venom not absorbed into the skin but unfortunately the other 90% of venom is spread through the body faster. Especially with Scorpions who have very viscous venom when compared to snakes or spiders. In this situation Ren would die.

Story. Fully. F*cking. Redeemed.

I doubt I'll continue reading this story. I hate the Cardin and Naruto partners bit. It's just really stupid. So many other choices and you go with that. The thing that pisses me off is that i absolutely loved the story until now. I might try to read a few more chapters but since I'm predisposed to hating it i see little chance of me finishing this.