Yea I'm sorry I can't get into this story even though I want to. I've never understood why men played any time of game and picked a female. I don't think I ever will. I thought that once the final hour was struck something similar to SAO would have happened the male player character would have changed to a male. I don't like the fact his a male inside a female body the concept just killed it for me and it's a shame since this is one of the only few overlord fanficions with plenty of chapters. Such a shame really.

This is great.

that's won't work if Raidyn defeats Marital Lord now how the vesselage of the emperor will come to be?
unless Marital Lord chicken out.

Can I make one suggestion about your writing. The section of the story during the invasion of the city feels a little disconnected to me because we don't get to experience the initial part of it from the perspective of the citizens. I feel, for example that there should have been dialogue from the people that first spotted the undead army, you know them just going about their day thinking it was going to be the same thing just a different day and then... BAM! their world gets flipped upside down. Same with the pedestrians you know, a mother fighting to protect their child, the selfish human nature that come out when one is in mortal danger. Essentially more first person perspectives and dialogues make the story more engaging. Other than that I'm liking this story more than I thought I would.

ok

please update your gate x overlord crossover

Yes not the way your master pees you dirty butler you.

Your going to tell everything I want to know or I am going to have Walter peel your dick like a bannana.
"Flexes strings menacingly"

vol 14 is tled, check novelupdates for the link

Nice

Wow

Lord of the Rings, The Witcher, Berserk, One punch Man, Diablo, Hokuto no Ken, Kill Bill... Just how many references are there?!

And they fit really nice too.

Btw, why Is Elysha so hated? I actually find her character refreshing: A player who actually has to be careful because almost everything can kill her.

And also a player who discover how dedicated (or addicted) to a game others can be.

Im still waiting for overlord x gate update

Honestly everytime I see you upload a new chapter, you instatly make my day, they're that great, keep it up and stay safe.
Aivae

thanks for the double release.

Yeeeeeeeet my dopamine went