I just realized I'm taller than archer even though I'm 15 and not even fully grown yet

I came back, and frankly this line pisses me off so fucking much.
"Ho… You'll provide more entertainment than that weak Servant."
Karna is a fucking asshole. He was looking down on Shirou, hell from this line he looks down on nearly every hero who worked hard for their victories, who did the impossible despite their weakness. While he is a demigod, whose power was given by the gods. I'm not dismissing his actions, but by far those heroes who lack such a background are far more heroic in my eyes.

Update?

Only wish there is more

This really is cute. I especially love how shirou's joke might get them married. Imagine if the locals make the wedding and basically coherce them to marry. That sounds funny.
I'm suprised by shirou's past actions. You would think he wouldn't involve bystanders and confront enemies directly instead of using kiritsugu's methods. He is stronger by orders of magnitude afterall when kiritsugu had to fight enemies using his assasin-y methods. Plus there are ways to protect his loved ones without killing innocents.
I agree, it's a good family of shirou jeanne and seig, but Seig's papa will forever be Seigfried. Not even shirou can take another dad's place
And while I love me an OP shirou, you did a really good job of balancing shirou so he isn't overwhelmingly powerful.
The grammar... is bad, but not as bad as you would think. I can get what you are trying to convey. There are some stories with grammar so bad you literally cannot understand what the fuck is happening. So don't worry too much about it.
I hope you continue! It's a good idea.

good cap, i hope the next

Thanks for the chapter

What "color" is Shirou? I remember that Semiramis was Assassin of Red. so that just leaves the black faction, or is he not part of either?

UPDATE?

Very good story , i wonder why the writer didn't continue this fanfic.

lol

ITS A TRAP!

I know that this story hasn't updated in a while but I just wanted to drop this review let you know that I really enjoyed your story. I'm still relatively new to the fandom but your fic was one of the few that I was able to get into and enjoy. Hope you're having a good day and happy writing

Actually Jeanne didn't know that Astolfo was a boy until he walked out of the shower with no towel.

Bumping in hope of a new chapter!
I wish to see more Shirou Jeanne Sieg family if you dont mind and really hope you will not stop this stoty. If you do stop... Well thank you for sharing your stories up to now, it was a pleasant reading!