I really enjoyed this and hope that you serious consider taking it up again

I read up to this point hoping for something original, but I see only things that have been written a thousand times, too bad.

frankly speaking.. harry is pretty stupid.. why cant he be more confident.. knowledgable and powerful...it is annoying ..

And I am losing interest because I've read this same story, slightly different words twenty times. Harry's not a Gryffindor and he's not going to be accepted by the tight knit Marauders. Frank and Alice both being Gryffindors and blocking Remus and Lily from being prefects is bugging me. Wasn't Alice a Hufflepuff? I know we don't know much about her cause Neville's Gran talks more of Frank.

I really like this story and hope you'll keep writing it again
Thank you for your work

I rather like this story so far. Your falling into the common age mistake though making Frank and Bellatrix close in age to the Marauders. For Frank and Alice to have gone through three years of Auror training and earned respect in their fields, they cannot have not graduated Hogwarts until 1978. Also, we know that Bellatrix is the oldest sister and Tonks was born to Andromeda in 1973. Background implies that Andromeda got pregnant while still at school. Unless she was creepily young, that would mean Bellatrix likely graduated by 1973 or sooner. She was never at school with the marauders other than perhaps the first year or two tops. It also helps build the reason for why she was such a talented dueler.

update?

I really hope you do continue this story

wished you would continue (nov 2018)

I have really enjoyed this story. I like how Harry fits in in this time and his interactions with the Blacks and the potters. Thank your for writing this!

Nearly all Marauder era stories put Harry in Gryffindor and room him with the Marauders, which is the worst choice because of the closeness of the Marauders and their friendship. Their project to become animagi and protect Remus makes them incredibly close knit. No way is Frank in their dorm room and they would never accept Harry or anyone else there either. Just saying... still a decent story just some common flaws that a lot of authors seem set on making to have Harry go to school with his parents and the others.

Harry’s a Slytherin...though granted, people from Slytherin are not seen as heroes.

Nice story all the same:) i likes your portrait of death

Thanks for your work, it would be great if you will finish/rewrite this story. More Bellatrix please _ Good luck in real life.
Grateful Reader.

I hope you decide to rewrite this story I enjoy the idea