Reviews for Touch
NikosJohnny chapter 6 . 11/20/2019
Keep Natsu and Lucy a couple and have they work out their problem. And Then they finally do it.
J.Jessy chapter 3 . 4/14/2019
There are some parts that get me confused :
1) Because Natsu didn't touch her since their wedding night, Lucy wants a divorce. Why don't she and Natsu sit and talk about it first ? maybe it's just a misunderstanding. And why wait 4 years to adress the question ?! isn't a divorce a decision too radical ?
2) sleepover ? aren't they for teenagers ? these guys, aren't they a bit too old for that ? well, I get that they're friends, so it's probably not strange to see them spend the night at their friend's house
3) It may be just me, but it seems that Lucy is a bit cold to Natsu. Is she taking her frustrations out on him ?
Maybe unconsciously she makes it harder for Natsu to reduce the distance between them. instead of a sleepover girls/boys, they should have prepared one date for themselves. Someone from the guild would babysit Nashi during that time. It'd be the perfect opportunity to revive the flame of passion between them.
bahall1964 chapter 4 . 4/14/2019
I just discovered this story and was very intrigued by it. I like the idea as it is outside the box of most stories. I am very glad that you are able to finish it. I am excited to see what happens next.
sylvestermoon727 chapter 1 . 3/1/2018
next chapter soon
sylvestermoon727 chapter 1 . 3/1/2018
thanks grizzly for the tips, as for you someone's it all depends on your opinions of stupid reasons
Someone's Bastard chapter 3 . 8/30/2017
It better not be a stupid reason he doesn't have sex with her
arika001 chapter 2 . 8/30/2017
I really like it. it's new and refreshing. Keep it up!
Grizzly98 chapter 2 . 8/23/2017
I like it. I don't typically find NaLu Wedding issue stories so it's awesome to find one that I'm able to read. For a bit of advice though, when a different character starts speaking start a new paragraph. It helps keep things straight and so people don't get confused. Overall I love the idea and can't wait for the next chapter.
Dakitten65 chapter 2 . 8/18/2017
Cnt wait for the next chapter