| Reviews for Homecoming |
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LunaD11 chapter 52 . 6/12 what a great way to end the story |
LunaD11 chapter 51 . 6/12 wow okay it sent it before I was finished... the pacing started out so slow and then suddenly jumped to where everything is summerized like an epilogue. Also love Donnie's new look! |
LunaD11 chapter 51 . 6/12 I will say my one critique for this series is that I wish you had cut the captivity time in half and extended the last few chapters. It's a beautiful story, but the pacing is |
LunaD11 chapter 50 . 6/12 Oooooh I love the idea of Mikey and Renet working together in the future! |
LunaD11 chapter 48 . 6/12 Aw man, I was hoping Mikey would smack his brothers, making them think one of them smacked the other! |
LunaD11 chapter 49 . 6/12 This was a good chapter, and long overdue! I wish it had been more drawn out. It was a big milestone, Donnie getting back into the field.. |
LunaD11 chapter 47 . 6/12 How can there only be a few chapters left? I don't want it to end... |
LunaD11 chapter 36 . 6/11 Was that a reference to when they held a contest for the theme song for BTTS? |
LunaD11 chapter 33 . 6/11 Noooo I need more of this chapter! This game was so cute, I loved the interactions! |
LunaD11 chapter 31 . 6/11 I love that you had her middle name be Dawn, I figured something like that would happen but struggled to think of a female name equivalent of Donatello haha |
LunaD11 chapter 30 . 6/11 the fruit loops and bo staff comment were gold my dude |
LunaD11 chapter 28 . 6/11 Yup, still crying. Such a beautifully written chapter. |
LunaD11 chapter 27 . 6/11 Excuse me while I go cry... Also loving the big bro Leo and Don moments in this fic. |
LunaD11 chapter 26 . 6/11 I'm so scared that Don's going to come home to an empty lair in some messed up reverse SAINW au |
LunaD11 chapter 22 . 6/11 what a twist! |