| Reviews for Dorne's Great Heaven |
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ryuuraidernight chapter 33 . 7/15 When is the sequel coming |
Frisc0 chapter 12 . 7/13 I'm reading this story for the secord time. Hot damn.. One of the best ff out there. Can only hope there's a sequel just as good. |
GermanGrandson chapter 33 . 7/12 I love the rest of the story, but I hate this ending. It gives off the feeling of a Diabolus ex Machina, you literally just threw all the 'bad guys' (and I'm using quotes because there is no real good and bad sides in this kind of thing, yadda, yadda) to give riboku a bigger challenge, it just sounds silly, especially after you set up Ned Stark as the rival. |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/23 I'm only a few chapters in but I'm already in love with this story! The writing is decent, but I feel that the plot is thicc. Also I enjoyed the image of sputtering Reach Lord in the last chapter. I also really appreciate this interlude to catch up on the stage being set. Looking forward to reading the rest! |
Frisc0 chapter 33 . 6/14 Haha I did not see that ending coming.. Lets hope Aerys does not come back from the dead as well. |
Frisc0 chapter 24 . 6/14 I read the AN on Lord Stark's characterization last chapter. I completely agree that it is your prerogative to characterize him and not follow canon... but when you try to keep the canon characterizations of Mace, Olenna, Tarly, Tywin, Jon Arryn, Oberyn, Robert (to a certain extent) and almost everyone else and only remake Eddard's character, it is a little disconcerting. |
Frisc0 chapter 23 . 6/14 wow.. I didn't know Eddard Stark, the honorable and stiff chump, could order the assassination of a Lord Paramount's son, implicate another for said murder and jeopardize the fledgling kingdom of his friend and foster father...that level of cunning and duplicity from him is completely alien. I like the story and clearly Quentyn is a genius because he is a reincarnated general from another world but this characterization of Eddard is completely and utterly out of character. He might as well be a reincarnated general as well, as should Robert, given the characterizations of the two... |
Frisc0 chapter 15 . 6/14 This story is absolutely stupendous! Loving it. I've always disliked the way the Dornish capitulated to the Rebels even after what happened with Elia.. This story does justice to the characterizations so far. |
Patrick Schuster chapter 33 . 6/10 Well, Great and Stupid are words that collide as are words like Genius and Crazy/Insane. That would in my opinion descripe that Novel . The Author wrote Roboku pretty good and the Story is great. But stupid is how you made Robert so Smart that I would call him a genius, well a genius Who likes whores and wine more then anything . Then there is the return of the Targaryens, more then Stupid ! Also you put Eddward Stark on the genius Level of Roboku which is so fcking Stupid! Your Novel is as Great as it is Bad ! |
piglet873 chapter 13 . 5/27 I AM LOVING THIS BOOK... THANK YOU DEAR AUTHOR. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17 Tells people about his past life immediate drop |
Eadlyn I chapter 33 . 5/13 TRANSMIGURATOR GENERAL FROM ANCIENT CHINA! |
Eadlyn I chapter 33 . 5/13 TRANSMIGURATOR GENERAL FROM ANCIENT CHINA! |
King Quinn Of Tucky chapter 23 . 5/8 bobby -b is eternal |
Zack Sager chapter 23 . 5/4 i agree with what you did ned and robart are best friends but we all know the north especially the starks value family above all |