Hello reader. Please turn back unless you wish to see this authors mental health issues displayed on screen... Or if you want to see Joker kill him self, because that's in chapter 5. Holy Jesus I know Yabadoloth is malding in false god afterlife if this is the sorry excuse for a character killed him. Arsene is blowing his brains out in disappointment. Hell Meshima is more useful. God this is terrible.

But RyujixHaru! Why, author-san!? T.T

Why are they in a polyamorous relationship now? That came out of left field. In this story, you said that Ann confessed first, and that Akira loved her the most. WHAT?

I think you just gave me emotional whiplash.

Heheheheheheheheheheehehehehhehhheheehehehh yayayayayyay

i was thinking tokyo ghoul season 2 like military force rescue, F

Fam... this good so far

Really like the set up so far been around the community for awhile this is my first time reviewing after making an account though really like the story so far :)

Wow this is probably the first time i ever left a negative note for a fanfiction and im not commenting against your writing itself because that is probably the only thing in here that is ok.

I only got to read three chapters and the epilogue and even that out of morbid curiosity just to see if this can be saved so i dont have the full story but even so i am confident that i wpuld utterly despise the rest.

Seriously what the fuck is this shit? Have you even played and finished the game? The story is utterly ludicrous. The characters are completely warped and nonsensical, its like you didnt understand any of them. No one behaves like they wpuld and should. Akira is completely unrecognizable and seemingly became a retard. Not to mention this mother character you came up with. What even...
By the end of the game Pt and Akira were heroes and his criminal record was gone. Nothing you have written makes sense in the post PT world by the end of the game.

In the first chapter i thought that the characters behaved oddly and the drama was cheap as hell but stuck with it but by the second i was just staring with my mouth open disbelieving at what i was reading.

Dont take this personally please and keep writing. Even this may be to someones taste but next time please think before writing. From my point of view this was easily the worst part of fic i have ever read. If i dislike something i just stop reading but this time i couldnt help but write because this is shit.

Good read. Still don't like the Harem thing though.

Thank god at least Futaba is viewing him as a brother

Trigger warning for the end of the chapter might be nice

I’ll be honest... I’m starting to really dislike this story. You seem to have given the Thieves an insurmountable enemy, where they have no special powers to help them get past the challenges ahead. Plus, to be completely honest, it feels like the drama is there for the sake of having drama, rather than for actual plot. It’s the way I feel it feels, at least. Take that as you will. I might end up just dropping this story because of the things going on in it. Not to my tastes. It feels like it’s going against about 80% of what Persona 5 was all about, changing the world, one person at a time. Most of the game was lighthearted, barring the Palaces and certain Confidant ranks.

No

An Xbox? Really? Not only is that the worst out of the three consoles (barely any exclusives, menu and controller design are horrible), but I was of the impression the Xbox line sold incredibly poorly in Japan.

They would've been just fine with just Sony and Nintendo - and without, say, Halitosis of the Wild (limited stamina, weapon and shield fragility, player character fragility and repetitive-through-optionality narrative do not suit Legend of Zelda, or any game for that matter) or any EA or Ubisoft or 2K game (greedy bunch of scumbags).