The last few pages were quite an ending! Too bad Kaelix still hasn't read that book, but surely Hermione will. There's a lot of setup for the next story.

The modifications to the canon ending came out well, but leaving most of it copied in unchanged got a little tedious. It could have benefited from more little changes, or perhaps some scene skipping.

Congratulations on finally finishing!

Oooo a mystery. If I was sitting I would be on the edge of my seat but alas I’m in bed supposed to be sleeping. So many HP fics, while entertaining, are mind numbingly predictable (oh wow she’s Sirius’s daughter I definitely didn’t know that after 5 minutes..) that this is an exciting change of pace. I have no clue what the connection between the wand owners are (other than Sirius and Katherine likely being romantically involved) and I can’t wait to find out what connects them.

“Is Professor Snape a vampire” made me laugh. What a great way to end the chapter. Kaelix is a really interesting character so far given how she was afraid she didn’t know who Remus actually was and that he had lied to her instead of being afraid of the fact that he was a werewolf.

I'm clapping. I've waited to read 3 chaps all together and I must say, it was mind blowing. Okay, maybe I forgot and kinda don't have time BUT all is good. I got to finish all 3 chap in one go and I am anxious for the next installment. Man. You write such great stories. Can't wait to read moreee. Thank you.

Wow that was so unexpected! I can't express how shocked I was by the turn of events with Kaelix. I loved Potter's banter with her even more than your previous chapters! I'm so excited to see where this is leading! Excellent work and have a lovely week!

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OHMYGOSH WHAAAA

Wow what can i say. this has been a wild ride!

Thank you so much for this fan fic! It's by far my favorite Harry Potter fan fic. It's written SO well, a lot better than most fan fics here. And the ideas and characters are beautifully crafted (I love the interactions between Kaelix and Malfoy). I can't wait to find out what happens next! rachelhanke you are my most favorite author ever. Again, thank you so much!

wow great chapter!

This was extremely well written, probably your best chapter yet! It has a seamless integration of Kaelix and I loved seeing her thoughts on Potter and Sirius. I can't wait for the next chapter, but don't burn yourself out either ;)

That sucks, being allergic to chocolate, its SO good!

brillaint chapter xx

I love how much more complex this scene is once you add Kaelix's story to the mix and I loved how all the characters played off of each other. The unspoken communication between her and Potter was very well done! Excellent chapter and I can't wait for the next one! I hope you stay safe!

Hope they all get a chance to hex Snape like in PoA...

The argument with everyone talking over each other and talking their time about reversing Pettigrew's transformation is frustrating, but also realistic...the only really weird thing is that in PoA everyone agreed at the end. Interested to see how Kaelix ends up "in chains".

Why didn't she ever read the Wegenstehl book? She must have some interest in it. Wish we could have seen look into a crystal ball again too. Hope we see some of what's going on there soon.

I was hanging on for every word there. The amount of suspense and intensity is insane. It was an amazing chapter and I really enjoyed reading that. I especially liked how everyone got in the way of each other and kept delaying the entire conversation, it was very true to their characters. Excellent chapter, I can't wait for the next one!

dude did you make Kaelix into a Horcrux?