Interesting story continue as soon as possible along with Metalmancer please really enjoying both of them

love this story great job thanks

Tbh it feels like some kid, who just learned new words, wrote this ff. The story is actually good.

While good, your writing style is a bit wordy and clumsy most of the time. It prevents the story from flowing well and makes some paragraphs feel like they are dragging on. When all else fails just keep out simple. I feel like that would make you a far more popular author.

Crap addition with that overdone Kushina garbage...

Good story otherwise.

Timeskip? Subtitle has me confufled

very good please continue

Hi there

So the battle between the fake and real is about to begin, I wonder how both feel about Naruto...

Anyway, keep up the great writing and stay safe!

Kushina was a jinchuuriki herself, so her believing that Naruto is not her son is impossible.

Really great story continue as soon as possible please looking forward to seeing what happens next

Interesting chapter

wow nice twist in the end is what it looks like keep it you are great thanks

Awesome! What a story and definitely very unique too! My only complaint is that I feel a lot of text is heavy and at times unnecessary repeats of phrasing from earlier making it at times pretty tough to read and overall is super AU which is not a bad thing.

I will say I found the Land of Spring mission to be relatively dull for the most part and while I enjoyed YugaoxNaruto I do feel like we could have seen some earlier development.

Also, w/ the Kushina development I feel that there is now more confusion then before. Are there now 2 Kushina's, is one fake, hopefully you answer that in the next update! Looking forward to Yugao and Kushina bonding, poor Minato getting divorced like that.

Hmm well liked the idea but this is really more Naru-stu than I can handle. Summons sage? That is just silly. Everyone hates him accept for the only people that matter in narrative? Beat friends with Sasuke and Hinata. Honestly just leaves no where to go if he is already the best and everything goes his way.

Same with faking the test. Homage could have gotten the information that Naruto was supposed to steal the scroll and ended it there. No need to make him go after Mizuki too. Well good luck with writing I hope next story you try is better

Like some of the ideas. Not a fan if the whole attack Naruto angle. It is pretty dumb to do when you know the leader is keeping track of the child.

Kurama would remember things well. He is old enough where around 70 years sealed is but a flicker if his existence. Also got Itachi a bit to old. 5 years older than his brother. In original he killed family at 13 while Sasuke was 8.

Not sure how bringing back parents will work. Not really needed if Mikoto is leader and Tsunade is around. Have to much stuff going on. Could not story down with too many side characters taking time up.