Keep up I love this don’t stop writing!

I don't understand why you don't proof read your stories. There are so many errors

Grammar definitely needs work

Not sure if it bnb is just me, but it seems that this chapter had a huge hit to quality - spelling, grammar, who is saying/doing what. I'm noticing it on a lot of stories in the last few days/weeks though, so it might be somthing up with the way the site is sgowing what has been uploaded. Might want to look over things after you upload them to see if there is a problem there. Still enjoying story overall though.

ni ce

I love this story a lot and it's a great read for me...also you made my new favorite couple ultear and Natsu even though it can't happen in the actual story. So thanks for the great read that I binged in a day.

Are you going to make Edolas' bow (I'm not a fan of that bow)
PS: I hope Natsu and Ultear have a daughter soon

Keep it up I love this story please.

DAMN this story makes me hate erza so much, like mind your own business.

Man, I don't think I've ever cringed more than that scene where it's just dropped into our laps that Ultear is Natsu's mate. It's so forced and contrived. There's nothing wrong with wanting to have him paired with her, but there's no need to come up with some forced and cliche "dragon slayers have mates" plot device that doesn't exist in the series. There was a readily available way you could have legitimately explained why they would include her in the plan; her magic controls time. You could have made it so they needed her help to carry out the plan. You could've laid the groundwork for the relationship by having her flirt with him and tease him after being brought there (because, ya know, that's part of her personality). Then when they actually go back in time, have her occasionally check in on him, slowly building the basis for a relationship.

Instead you chose some cliche plot device that just makes it a relationship right away with absolutely no build or anything.

*bang!*
"ugh..."
This thing was able to physically hurt me!
It was SUPER CRITICAL! And I was just reading it!

Hohoho so Anna makes an aparence early in the story goooooood

Great chapter! Keep it up!

Finally caught myself up on this story. Really like where this is going, and ignore the haters, feed their flames to Natsu! Onward to the next chapter!

About the whole dragon slayers and the anima thing I don't believe it's just dragon slayers but all slayers. After all what makes dragon slayer magic so much more special than the other slayer magics?