the whole plot itself is super fascinating and i am genuinely loving the development! although i have to say if you had made jess tailed zach just out of curiosity to when they all headed to sabrina's house, maybe you could've made like some kind of happy ending for zach's relationship and expanded upon the idea a bit further? anyways, the story is superb! lovin it!

Man I am really liking these fanfics you have written for Housepets! lately. Especially the focus and attention you have given Tiger. I have never written a review before, but I broke that cycle, because I want you to know that you got someone here who wants to read more. So whatever you do, don't stop.

Alright, Now I know about your fanfiction account.

These stories seem to be pulled from the forums rather quickly.

This is pretty good, I like where you're going with it.

(Bandit1990)