Great story, hope you update soon.
You should have Lincoln lose control of his emotions and go 'Lola' on the two.
Also, don't know if you already have it figured out or not, but maybe you should keep Lincoln as a kid more than the rest of the summer, maybe even permanently, well, he'll age with Lana and Lola I mean.
You should have either Clyde or Ronnie Ann find out about Lincoln next, and third

Huh, seems like those two low brow knuckle dragging Neanderthals need a refresher on the lesson learned on Halloween, in Spades. Yes, I made the pun:-)