When it comes to insults, you can never go wrong with the Scotsman.

Amazing story

noice.

hey, hello, you know, you make very good storyes, but you never complete them, why?

Metahuman experiment done in Markovia basically a lab rat

this is awesome update soon

Wow, this is very interesting but I do have a question, can't team RWBY, (J)NPR, and CFVY just head to Jump City and try to find Jaune? Or did they even know who to ask for his whereabouts? (Does Opzin know where Jaune went?

Hey dude don’t stress to hard about the fight scenes you are doing a good job. Keep it up

Nice work

Mammoth isn't bane's son, but he does have a sister name shimmer. Update ASAP!

Yeah Mammoth and his sister Shimmer are natural Meta Humans form Australia. They were mocked by their fellow children and turned their powers (with Shimmer having the power of to transmute any element or compound into another.) After being run out of town by angry villians they were sold to a scientist in Markovia who tried to teach them morality only to fail to do so. They were original members of the Fearsome Five along with Doctor Light (founder/ original leader, before he got his brain scrambled and became a joke character he was a serious bad guy who I honesty feel like he should have been given the chair for his deeds, heck the JL argued about that before Zatanna gave him a magic lobotomy removing the memories of Batman of the incident to do so.), Gizmo, Psimon (who became the second leader after being controlled by the benefactor of his powers Trigon), Jinx (Indian Sorceress, who was bald and slender due to cancer), Neutron (started out as a Superman Villain)

Great chapter mate

Awesome chapter Part 1 continue please.

KO awesome chapter, well looks like the titans are having a tough time against the HIVE but they’ll soon turn things around in their favor.

I don't think Mammoth is Bane's son in the comics. But to be honest, I actually think that Bane should be Mammoth's father in this story. Keep up the good work!