It is well written considering it’s a smut that is but it is disappointing that u stop updating it

Please continue.

Can you continue this?

The writing really needs some work.

Update ever coming

noooo I wanted to see the meeting

please don't abandon all of your projects and keep updating for the love of your fan

Great, love the lomons

Lots of Fun! We can only hope that RL, and your Muse, will allow you to pick these fine stories back up sometime soon (hoping, hoping...). The things that a certain "Flaming Bird" gets him into (and out of too), and I doubt that even Fawkes knew for sure what he was getting Harry into, namely the very Being that He is but a very small portion of, The Phoenix Force Itself! And even as powerful as Jean, and now Harry are (which seems Godlike), they too are but a small portion (more so than Fawkes and his brethren) of said Force. I agree with Harry concerning Prof. X, all too Dumbledorian in how he treats people in general, particularly Jean in canon, his attempted blocking of her Phoenix force power, like Harry said, turned her into a ticking time bomb waiting to explode, which also allowed her to be even further manipulated to the Dark side for a time, leading to her eventual death due to pretty much everyones paranoia, including the Shiar. The Phoenix Force itself isn't Evil in any way, however, many of it's Avatars (like Jean, and now Harry) weren't treated right, were mistrusted, and even feared to a point that they basically went nuts, thereby adding to that fire so to speak. This time Jean (with the able assistance of Fawkes, and later Harry) won't have the problems that her canon counterpart had due to her intimate understanding of the Phoenix Force. Harry suspects that he and Stori are walking into a potential hornets nest, of which he is more than able to fix so to speak, even if a certain Platinum Blond Totally hot Diamond skinned Telepath along with a Kinetic energy absorbing brute, or a mindbending creep is waiting for them (just to mention a few of the Club Members). Thank You. TTFN

Awesome work

Please finish this story it's really good and you can't leave it there

update soon

please update soon

I never did finish this since I was gonna wait till you finished the original playboy so I could transition and enjoy, but I got bored of waiting so here I am. It's like a third path plot wise and even better when it comes to the porn so all in all a very exciting and rewarding fic. I very much hope you continue to release chapters on your works. Thanks for the read!

Well played. Such depth and despite situation foretelling, just diving in to make your own magic with the twists, exploring and suuden changes of direction.