please continue this fanfic loving it so far

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I definitely like what I see so far!

I love this story, especially the interactions between the Doll and Dumbledore

An excellent story so far, I hope you plan to finish it eventually.

Loving the story. It's very unique in it's premise. I hope to see it continue.

Lol, endgame Bloodborne Hunter taken out by a basic stupefy spell instantaneously? It’s a miracle he got past the first encounter. It sort of blows my mind that a mind-based spell could even touch him, given that he probably has Deep runes and the constant hum of beasthood in his blood, it really messes with my suspension of disbelief to see him one shot by the most basic spell in the HP universe when he can dodge bullets as a Hunter. I could totally see more powerful spells wounding him or even killing him, but Stupefy? He has definitely fought against and overcome stronger magical effects in the dream, and no matter how you play it I can’t see that working... ever. Even discounting the increased resistance his gear would have given him, he’s still orders of magnitude stronger than a simple stunning charm. It’s just a bad match up, Yharnam is all about magic space aliens messing with people’s minds and to get to where he did he would have had to overcome that many times over. Using a spell that only knocks someone unconscious would be like throwing an egg at a wall. At the very least it would need multiple castings, and that’s not even taking into account that he’s not an idiot first year with no experience anymore... he knows to dodge. That should have, without a doubt (in my mind), led to a fight. Also, there is no place in the world where it’s acceptable for doctors to forcibly take blood from you when you specifically tell them not to... or to keep you trapped in the infirmary for no reason. All of this just combined into the perfect storm to send me crashing out of any immersion I had for this latest chapter, which is a shame because I really like this story. I hope that the author takes a look at this and really thinks about what level Harry would be at in compared to the average wizard and what magic would be less effective against because of his status as a Paleblood Hunter. It’s just unbelievable for him to be getting one shot by the magic equivalent of a random goon with a handgun when he’s just... so completely out of her league combat wise. He’s not even humanly out of her league, but supernaturally so. I recognize that it might be difficult to reconcile Harry Potter as a person with an end of the game Hunter so I won’t hold this that harshly against the story yet, but he’s not the same Harry who has never fought a soul in his life. He’s killed alien space gods, and a crotchety old nurse has no right beating him in a fight without pulling out some very serious magic.

Awesome

"An infant? What kind of person would want to murder an infant?"

Well gee, I'm sure Harry Potter can't think of a single person. Real tactful question, Hermy1

Ugh, even with so much more important and terrible matters going on, Ron the Vacuous Whiner being a jealous git still manages to be as annoying as it was in canon. But I'm enjoying this story, and very interested to see how this will go, what with characters from Bloodborne being transplanted into Hogwarts, rather than the other way around, which is more common in crossover fics. It's a little slow-paced but that's to be expected at this point, and I've no real criticisms to speak of, apart from the occasional minor instance of missing punctuation. I just hope the story won't be abandoned before it really gets going, like so many other fics that have shown such promise.

So update! Or the author will face the Hunt.

Will chapter 3 be released anytime soon?

Tom Riddle is resurrected...

Young Dumbledore: Tom... LET ME SHOW YOU HOW I BEAT GRINDLEWALD INTO A PULP.

Tom: HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE?!

Dumbledore: I'LL TAKE YOUR ENTIRE LITTLE FAN CLUB TOO. AT THE SAME TIME.

Death Eaters: OH MERLIN WHY?

Dumbledore: YOU DON'T NEED TO ASK MERLIN, I'M RIGHT HERE. ASK GOD FOR MERCY INSTEAD.

have you corrected chapter 3 yet? i really wanna know what happens after 2

I really loved this so far! You’ve done a really good job of portraying just how traumatizing the nightmare would be.

This story is amazing! I love your writing style and I also very much enjoy the direction the plot is going.
If you could update it a bit faster I would be the happiest person in the world!