Blaire's dad doesn't deserve redemption

This book is great. I love Blaire - she's definitely a favourite twilight oc for me.

I’m back and I’m drooling. Man, do I love the image in my head of Jaspy on motorcycle *heart eyes*

Sooo... you really had to do that to us, huh? That was rude and I, for one, am very hurt

This chapter is def one of my all time faves from this fic

the way jasper casually drops that "beautiful" is iconic

If it's not bella, waylon, or her mother, blaire doesnt want it! jasper can stay but he's on thin fucking ice!

love this chapter soooo much, twitch

I really hope that blaire makes it out on the other end of this spiral. I know it gets so so much worse before then, but I hope it's all for something and that she feels peace at the end. Her personality really shines the brightest when she's supporting other people too. My favorite parts of this chapter are her conversations comforting jasper and reuniting with bella. I know you say this chapter is filler, but I feel like blaire and her torment wouldn't feel real without them! It cant be all action all the time!

"things that should be discussed" ! What I would give to know exactly what things needed to be discussed and how it went!

"Maybe I was so mad at Bella because she was actually living her life, and I felt like I was dying in mine." YO this quote is so raw, it could be the teaser summary for the whole fic. Things have fallen apart so badly for blaire that it makes sense that she's desperate and empty. And to think she *still* hasn't hit rock bottom...I just want my girl to be happy! Please let her be happy soon :'(

God, I totally understand blaire's logic here, but she has to realize at some point that she's just up shit creek without a paddle. Like, beyond the point of intervention. She's manic about going after waylon's killers and it's making the situation so so so much worse.
Great writing as always! I love your dialogue and you always write amazing arguments lmao

This chapter... whew

First off, I can't help but imagine Alice's closet to be like the iconic Hannah Montana closet, which is the dream to preteen me.

Second, and more importantly: my brain is just a series of exclamation marks at this chapter. They've finally basically admitted to feeling something for each other even if they both don't want it to nice forward at the expense of taking down the other vampires. But damn, they'll torture each other in the meantime, and I'll live reading it! It just makes the moment when they actually get together that much sweeter. Their energy is so well matched and that's on display perfectly here.

Ugh, well done, def a top 5 of chapters you've written for this fic

ALICE! honestly she's perfect and I love how you write her! I NEED more Cullen family interactions in the sequel just to see more of the battling personalities haha

Also, I just wanted to compliment how polished your writing is! The amount of editing that has to go into each chapter is probably astounding (unless you're just that good) and I want you to know that I appreciate the level effort given to each character, storyline, and chapter!

(sorry if this is super similar to another review I left recently! ffnet is freaking out and not showing my posted reviews? But the sentiment still stands)

Alice! Ahhh she's so precious!

Also, I know I've said this many times before but you're writing seems so effortless to the reader! I know you've put SO much work into this fic just by how polished it is!

I don't want to agree with blaire's parents, but she does need some help, and not just the kind jasper can provide :(

I need to know more from jasper's pov especially during moments like him comforting blaire after the vampires played with her. He keeps a damper on his emotions-for obvious reasons-but I need get a glimpse into his calculating mind. Mostly bc then we'd get HIS internal monologue about blaire and I would LIVE for that!