| Reviews for Legend of the Inuzuka |
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VoidWolfie27 chapter 4 . 8/6 Holy hell, I NEED MORE O’ DIS! |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/16 Please continue this story! |
Amythyst Aquarius chapter 1 . 5/1 Seriously hoping you finish this story. I'm still waiting to read the ending! |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/29 Plz plz plz plz update a new chapter! |
vegetagirl123 chapter 4 . 3/15 You need to to update this story along with maiden of chaos and hope I love this story and I hope you didn’t abandoned this story or forgotten. This is the best story so far but can you update soon I can’t take it |
Leilani chapter 2 . 2/2 Can you please update this fanfic. Its a one of a kind & I cant find anything even remotely like it online so reading it is always a treat. LOVE IT. Good job. |
jesasaurus93 chapter 3 . 12/12/2019 )I already posted on four so here I am haha) I really hope this gets updated again. I lvoe your verison of Kiba and I can't wait to what changes he could add to Inuyasha world and what have the 5 Hokages back in Narutos world would do. Fingers crossed for an eventual update! |
harrypotteryaoi12 chapter 2 . 11/7/2019 Hope You Update Soon ! |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/21/2019 Please update this story. I've read your ther stories and I just want to read them over and over again |
Althaea Amastacia chapter 4 . 10/18/2019 hole you update soon |
Jelisa Johnson chapter 4 . 9/23/2019 This story was well written and keep me on the edge of my seat. I recommend readers to read this story. It's 2019 and it's still a good read. |
Missy8114 chapter 4 . 8/4/2019 This story is really good and I hope you find your muse and start updating soon. Also I like the fact that you aren't giving Kiba a harem. I'm not fond of harem stories and think a 2 or 3 in a relationship is enough and less confusing. |
Xx chapter 3 . 5/31/2019 I like how the tamest thing about Kiba is his hair. Ah yes, Kiba lookin' smokin' hot in formal heir shinobi clan get up. No! Don't leave Haruka out in the cold! Come on! Makoto/Nobuyuki/Haruka ! Also, kenjutsu is the art of swordplay, kinjutsu are forbidden techniques, like the shadow clones and Edo Tensei. |
Xx chapter 2 . 5/31/2019 Yeah... about the hollow feeling... If it's not the need for a pack (as friends and family, clan and comrades as well as life-partner ninken still left him feeling hollow and empty)... is it the need for a mate or something? It would explain the Inuzuka instinct reactions... Idk. I like how he's wearing 'slightly heeled sandals'. I bet Kurenai had them all wear proper high heels as a balance exercise and for infiltration missions (and just to feel the pain). It's interesting how they (human priest and demons alike) find Kiba's mysterious white chakra soothing, even when he's flaring it in warning. If he actually used killing intent, unless it was specifically directed at them, they'd probably find it protective and feel safe. As far as pairings go... Kiba is from a clan with close affiliation with dogs (reminds me a bit of the Princess Mononoke story actually) ...and Kouga is a wolf demon that feels comfortable around him...Sesshomaru in a dog demon...things are good yes? Just one thing: the difference between weary and wary; Weary: weary /ˈwɪəri/ adjective 1. feeling or showing extreme tiredness, especially as a result of excessive exertion. "he gave a long, weary sigh" synonyms:tired, tired out, worn out, exhausted, fatigued, overtired, sleepy, drowsy, wearied, sapped, dog-tired, spent, drained, jet-lagged, played out, debilitated, prostrate, enervated, jaded, low; More 2. reluctant to see or experience any more of; tired of. "she was weary of their constant arguments" synonyms:tired of, fed up with, bored with/by, sick of, sick and tired of, jaded with/by, surfeited with/by, satiated by, glutted with/by; More verb 1. cause to become tired. "she was wearied by her persistent cough" synonyms:tire, tire out, fatigue, wear out, overtire, exhaust, drain, sap, wash out, tax, overtax, enervate, debilitate, enfeeble, jade, incapacitate, devitalize, prostrate; More 2. grow tired of or bored with. "she wearied of the sameness of her life" synonyms:tire of, become/get weary of, become/get tired of, become/get fed up with, become/get fed to death with, become/get bored with/by, become/get satiated with, become/get jaded with, become/get sick of, become/get sick to death of, sicken of; More Wary: wary /ˈwɛːri/ adjective feeling or showing caution about possible dangers or problems. "dogs which have been mistreated often remain very wary of strangers" synonyms:cautious, careful, circumspect, on one's guard, chary, alert, on the alert, on the lookout, on the qui vive, prudent; More |
Xx chapter 1 . 5/30/2019 I SEE THE BOX! Really though, this is an amazing fic. It's a shame about Akamaru, but I suppose, where would he fit? Strong!Kiba is the best, and he's actually quite modest about it: he felt helpless, so he trained to diminish the chance of being so again, end of story. It's really interesting to see him interact with others, both human and demonic because as a shinobi and even as an Inuzuka, he is very different from anyone else. I love that the crystal he purified WITH MINIMAL EFFORT is cleaner than Kagome's. Screw that bitch. Ah Kiba, already with potential dynamics with the new comrades? And such a high up one too? I would LOVE to see more Kiba and Seshomaru dynamics! Shinobi Magic for the win! Fuck off Kagome! U cruel Bitch! Yay for Kiba! Team 7 Luck has infected another! You poor bastard! This is just the beginning, but now it's too late to run! (*Cackles madly in the distance* I'm loving it!) |