Hello darkness once again.

Your logic is shit, grammar and progression needs improvement. Utterly pathetic excuse of a story

your scaling is all over the place based off what you wrote than naruto is as powerful as kaguya. juubi madara doesn't have the same amount of power as kaguya, since kaguya has twice the amount of power as the original full power juubi. Which also means that you're saying that madara without the juubi is as powerful as the juubi to make up for the difference in power, and madara without juubi wouldn't even be able to face a sosp mode naruto in a 1v1. Than you put a perfect susanoo sasuke without rinnegan as shinju naruto and juubi madara no rinnegan. Just saying your power scaling is all over the place.

WTF is this shit it sucks all of it

I love dragon ball abriged thank you for that reference its always funny

More please

So naruto has only half the power of the shiny? Did he at least absorb madara and sasuke in the dimensional void? And why the hell did naruto lose so much of his power!

Really good hope you update soon

Dude, your grammar and spelling suck. I can't stand reading your fanfiction although it has good storyline. You need to fix it

Bueno yo solo pido un hamura x izanami xd,o toneri x lefiya con eso puedo morir feliz jeje,aun que me gusto la parte de madara y sasuki es mas interesante que naruto,aun que espero que continues.

And stop using japanese word in such half assed way.
You're writting in english for a reason.
Whats the point of using romanji? I bet you're not even understanding what you write and use the copy/paste function on the wiki.
Its not cool, i doesn't make the narration better, it doesn't add anything to the story. So, why? It has no purpose. So try to actually write something everyone understand. Or stop doing it half assed and go full kanji everywhere.

Rushed, weeb, rushed, rushed, rushed, RUSHED annnnd rushed.
So in one chapter, he just spilled out he came from another dimension and she just took it like that. Then he just told her about his whole life and again, she just accepted it without thinking twice about it. And a couple day later, they kissed and are in a relationship?
For the leader of a ENTIRE faction, your Yasaka is dumb as hell. Not questionning what he said even once. Not even trying to investigate a little bit. No, just... blindly trust him because of... plot? Thats quite the shitty leader that we go there.

Wait if madara has the other 50% of juubis chakra that means he’s made out of chakra just like Naruto so couldn’t Naruto just abosorb madara

God damn this story is cringy af

This was BS of a chapter. The moron of a MC gains immense power and what the cretin does with it? Simply plays and does not go for the kill. He simply transforms into a fox for whatever, even if such a move could lead to exhaustion. What type of person does such a thing? He should absorb the chakra and biju from Sasuke and Madara and simply go to another world if he so wished to have peace. Why leave your enemies with power? If you have all that you need to take the power from them.