Oh boy the gascoine bossfight , wonder if he can be saved from turning or death this time poor viola though.

huh this is an interesting twist.

Eileen THE CROW :D

Loving your take on bloodbonre, it’s very well written, is this story still active?

So glad i found this story again! I love your work

this got really really sad, GOOD JOB :D

This is definitely one of the better bloodborne fics I've read, it's been keeping me engaged and ive had no problems with it, everything has been great!

And finally we arrive, at long last. I can’t wait to see how you continue.

Woop, another chapter. I feared this story was dead for a bit. Very very glad it’s not, this was a good chapter.

I'm loving this so far, honestly one of the best bloodborne fanfics I've read and trust me it's difficult to find ones bloodborne ones I enjoy!
Are you planning on continuing it?

Thank you for taking the time out of your life to wrutr this story, and ad for how I feel about it?
"Ah, Majestic!"-Micolash my favorite madman and least favorite boss

This is an pretty good story. Keep it up. BTW, is it too much to ask if you'll spare Iosefka from her fate in the game? I've been hoping for a story that would do that.

Either way, it would be nice to read a longer chapter. No need to rush. 2,000 to 5,000 words are good enough and it shows you'd put in enough work to put a chapter out at those sizes. A different perspective wouldn't hurt either for Ettie. It would give your characters more structure in the world rather than seen as other characters the main character has interactions with. It help flesh them out if you intend on keeping them around and give the story more weight if something happened to them.

I would love to get right into the Hunt, and see how an outsider sees fighting the beasts for a living. Also Ettie and the impostor will turn into an interesting plot accessory

This was a good one, a good, small bit of character and world building. The only problem I have is the “blood echoes”. I know it’s a game mechanic and that it makes sense to hunters belonging to the dream but to a man who knows nothing of the dream? Of the Old Ones? Realistically he’d think the blood minister a nut at best. Maybe reword it a bit? I don’t know and it’s not a big deal but it feels like it impedes on the more gritty, realistic feeling you have going on. Not the debt bit but just the use of “blood echoes” as the payment when it’s never really described as a currency acknowledged outside of the bath traders and the doll. Actually, there being a debt is pretty good and adds something to the world. But yeah, other than literally just that, this chapter was great.