He's just 80 and already this old, isn't he at least a bit powerful? And most importantly, Hurt/Comfort flag doesn't mean the main character has to be a whiny little bitch.

Like a computer jamming together a "story" by randomly grabbing outlines, gags, ideas, tropes, characters. Then printed, shredded, feeding to a story beast, then poking the beast to vomit up the content, voilà, this mess.

You have hundreds following and faving, so my harsh WTF unkind review shouldn't offend or hurt. Therefore I was blunt and rude. An alternative detailed review, would be like...possibly longer than the chapter to point out half the IMO flaws and WTFs.

thank you

OK, color me confused, as the only way that Lily's bloodline could end would be due to Harry himself dieing. Where as Petunia is of the Evans line just as Lily is, but as her sister, and Dudley is Petunia's son, so with the deaths of Petunia and Dudley, that would only end Petunia's line. The only other way to end Lily's line would be to supplant her DNA from Harry, and substitute someone else's (and IT would have to be Female as well, as as far as I know, there are only XX, and XY chromosomes in the human genome, not YY at all). I did notice Harry quoting something Tom said to Dumbledore (when they first met at the orphanage), so it would appear that he at least has some of Tom's memories and/or magical skills (possibly even his power too). I think that we can assume that the "robed man" that was hiding in the shadows was Ozymandias, but what plans that he may yet have for Harry remain to be seen. Thank You. TTFN

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

interesting start

It will be fun to see "who" this Robed Man is. Even though all three of the Dursleys are now Dead, that still leaves Harry, who IS the last and Only piece of Lily Evans' bloodline (Petunia was her Sister, and Dudley was her Nephew), so unless you pulled All of Lily's DNA from Harry, and substituted someone else's, He would only be a weird clone of James Potter (and as far as I know, you can't Clone anyone without utilizing a Female genome or egg in the process). Interesting that Harry was speaking with Tom's voice (and with words that Tom had told Dumbledore when they met at the orphanage), so that might infer that Harry has absorbed some or all of the Horcrux from the Scar (besides the knowledge from his future self). Obviously the Team of Wizards are from the Ministry (DMLE?), and/or the Order of the Flaming Chicken. Thank You. TTFN

A weird in a good way story I hope you write more often

Awesome chapter. Please update soon.

Oops guess they pushed him a bit too far eh?

I think Bitch should be Delphini Riddle.

Good story idea. I like to see more soon.

just would like to see longer chapters.
#1 yes.
#2. fates/some god messing around and screw things up

Nice choice of people for Harry's harem. :) I hope you'll continue this so that we can see all of them interacting with Harry. Not to mention of course the tease of Hermione it seems.
Also any chance of him gaining a certain enormous basilisk as companion in addition to a certain beautiful snow owl? ;)
And to answer your question: I wouldn't mind Delphini, though of course it begs the question how to add her considering that in canon she was born during Harry's sixth year... :/ But maybe in your AU she could have been conceived at the end of the previous war and maybe born while Bellatrix was already in Azkaban? Of course the Ministry would ensure that the child wouldn't be kept there or even remotely in contact with her mother...

How about you worry less about your harem and focus more on chapters that take longer than one or two minutes to read?

There's just no content here.