I really love this story, a good balance of plot and smut, good writing, an interesting unice story idea and great ending,even the alternetivs are great. I really HOPE you write more amazing storys.

Interesting. It's a little interesting to follow this story and wonder what might have been. Thanks for writing this, it's inspired me a lot and I enjoyed the balance of story and lemon.

Well I'm liking the epilogues so far. A nice variety.

Not gonna lie, I'm kind of hoping TK gets a happy ending even if I do want to see Homeostasis lose.

Great chapter, can't wait until you release the next.

In the words of Akihiko Sanada I've been waiting for this. Great chapter, can't wait to see what's next.

A great addition, I'd be lying if I didn't admit this is inspiring me quite a lot, I do feel like I've missed a page somewhere but I get you're trying to keep the mystery as to who is in the right here.

Great, great, GREAT chapter! I lo...
Well, I'm not into many gay things, but there is one or another gay things that can be... acceptable.
But the BESTEST of all in this chapter to me is.. GENDER BEND!
You see, shortly after I lost my.. Innocence, I discovered a game called Gender Bender DNA Twister Extreme (GBDNATE). I just saw a few let's plays, didn't play it. But two days ago, I downloaded it and played it. Then I read this chapter and...
So, yeah! I really liked this chapter, like all chapters, really, but still.
THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER !
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I'm really torn on the latest chapter of this tale. On one side I can see what you're going for and liked most of the stuff you've written until now, but I feel that you mishandled Ken's attitude to his old Kaizer stuff. Ken DESPISES his past self to the point where he'd rather die than go back to that part of his life. I get that it's a result of the power he has, but it's kind of something that I feel doesn't gel.

Other than that I really love what you've been writing and the twist at the end certainly makes a lot of sense. Looking forward to seeing more.

How about Iori’s crest be the crest of understanding and his power would make people more likely to talk to Iori about their problems and make him at the same time good at understanding them

Hey, you did chapt 12 now keep updating plz this story is amazing

Keep updating

Aww it’s over pls post a 12th chapter

What’s Mimi’s power?

The part where TK talked about the digital world was funny and you have to admit it, fighting computer monsters with a cat that becomes and angel that then becomes a dragon? Is pretty messed up