| Reviews for I'll Write to You |
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   Aservis Roturier chapter 13 . 9/12/2018 I seem to recall reading this story before, and while I enjoyed it both times I seem to recall a much longer, MUCH more satisfying and detailed showdown at the end! As another reviewer commented, the last chapter feels very rushed and is lacking in the detailed vengeance the reader craves. Having the lights come up and the 'bad guys' simply disappear leaves the reader very frustrated. The revenge should have at least the detail and time given to it that you gave the build up to it. Ciel was tortured at length and the queen reveled in her power. The demon demands equal time and then some. And if fr some reason this site won't allow you thestory you want to tell remember there is always Archive Of Our Own! In spite of this niggling complaint this is still one of my most favoured stories. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/1/2018 9/10 very good fanfiction but the ending was rushed and a bit confusing . LOL Finny sees and knows all ! ಠ_ಠ |
| RosaConnor12 chapter 13 . 10/10/2017 I like how the last line would be something Finny would say. I hope to read more Ciel and Sebastian pairings! |
| RosaConnor12 chapter 8 . 10/9/2017 Omg! I’m fanning my face out of excitement! I can’t wait to continue reading this story. This is really good so far. |
| HeartElyse chapter 13 . 10/6/2017 This story was really quite beautiful. Just with the letters and how they were used to progress the plot, it's something I haven't really seen before, and something that I found really enchanting to read. It was addicting even. Thank you so much for writing this story! It was such a pleasure to read :) |
| promocat chapter 13 . 10/6/2017 very much! & i love what happened to the queen & her butlers! |
| Undaunted One chapter 12 . 9/27/2017 I love this story so far! I cannot wait for an update! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/7/2017 Such short chapters though... |
| promocat chapter 12 . 9/7/2017 i understand that ciel's family is loyal to the throne-but there comes a piont where he should tell her where to go & how to get there & just take off with sebastian |
| ChlomeTov chapter 10 . 8/31/2017 Omg I'm freaking out! I'm really enjoying this story so far. I'm falling in love with your use of words in Ciel's and Sebastian's letters, it's like reading poetry. But oh dear, my heart is racing in fear of Ciel. I will be anxiously awaiting to see what happens next as I pray for a speedy update :) |
| SerpensPrincess chapter 11 . 9/2/2017 Loving |
| promocat chapter 11 . 9/1/2017 so glad sebastian found him!(not as glad as ciel) |
| promocat chapter 10 . 8/31/2017 the queen should watch it-a pissed off demon might do something ciel would regret later |
| SerpensPrincess chapter 10 . 8/31/2017 Uh oh. What does the Queen want? Can't wait for more. |
| promocat chapter 9 . 8/29/2017 i do not like this queen !(sebastian doesn't either)but ciel is loyal-almost too loyal |
